The best way to understand the character of a society is to examine the character of the men and women that the society chooses as its heroes or its heroines.
The character of a society is determined by the character of the people who form that society. A society idolizes certain men and women as its heroes and heroines depending on what these people have done for the society. These people may be politicians or they may have brought about a radical change in the way people live in that society. Irrespective of what they have done for the society, their characters cannot determine the character of the entire society as these people will have their own individual characteristics that cannot reflect the characters of all the people who are a part of that society. This is because each individual has his own perception about the things around him and this perception shapes his character. There may be some cases wherein people try to emulate their idols, but this does not mean that the entire society's character can be understood by studying the character of its heroes and heroines.
The news channels and the newspapers are always following well-known people for a peep into their personal lives. Lady Diana was adored and loved by millions of people across the world. She was the idol of not only her country but also many other countries around the world. There have been numerous occasions where people have maligned her name by associating her with scandals even after her death. If these accusations are true, then do the societies that worship her have the same character? What about the heroes and heroines who are respected and loved for the characters that they portray in movies? It is a well known fact that the lives of models, actors and artists are laced with scandals and controversies. Some of them are known drug-addicts and others lead amorous lives. Does the society that idolizes these people have the same character? It would be wrong to assume that the society has the same character as it is an accepted fact that these people are liked for their values other than their characters. Therefore, it is not necessary that the entire society behaves in a manner similar to the people who are loved by the masses.
Another example is that of the political leaders who have been elected by the people of a country to lead them. If they have been elected because of their honesty and their patriotism, then does this mean that the entire society is honest? On the contrary, what if one of the politicians is corrupt and unscrupulous? Will this reflect the character of the people who have elected him? The people who have elected this particular politician may be conservative, honest and God-fearing, but it is unfortunate that the true character of the politician whom they have elected as their leader is hidden from them. Even if they can see his true form after he has already been elected, a close examination of his character would reveal a character that would be far from that of the society that has chosen him.
In view of the above, it can easily be concluded that the character of a society and that of the people idolized by the society are not related in any way whatsoever. There may be some cases wherein someone has tried to imitate the character of the person he considers a hero. However, on the whole, the character of a society is independent of the character of the people chosen as its heroes and heroines. In other words, the character of the heroes and heroines is not an indication of the character of the society that has chosen them.
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'well', 'in other words', 'on the contrary', 'on the whole']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.218408736349 0.240241500013 91% => OK
Verbs: 0.177847113885 0.157235817809 113% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0592823712949 0.0880659088768 67% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0327613104524 0.0497285424764 66% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0670826833073 0.0444667217837 151% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.134165366615 0.12292977631 109% => OK
Participles: 0.0577223088924 0.0406280797675 142% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.55219449 2.79330140395 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.00780031201248 0.030933414821 25% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0015600624025 0.0016655270985 94% => OK
Determiners: 0.14352574103 0.0997080785238 144% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0234009360374 0.0249443105267 94% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0296411856474 0.0148568991511 200% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3442.0 2732.02544248 126% => OK
No of words: 598.0 452.878318584 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.75585284281 6.0361032391 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.94510247834 4.58838876751 108% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.329431438127 0.366273622748 90% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.229096989967 0.280924506359 82% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.148829431438 0.200843997647 74% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.110367892977 0.132149295362 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55219449 2.79330140395 91% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 219.290929204 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.366220735786 0.48968727796 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 43.813177458 55.4138127331 79% => OK
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6194690265 131% => OK
Sentence length: 22.1481481481 23.380412469 95% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6144937095 59.4972553346 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.481481481 141.124799967 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1481481481 23.380412469 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.444444444444 0.674092028746 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.21349557522 0% => OK
Readability: 45.0578471448 51.4728631049 88% => OK
Elegance: 1.47752808989 1.64882698954 90% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.659029872033 0.391690518653 168% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.166949855663 0.123202303941 136% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0997006232117 0.077325440228 129% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.561242485807 0.547984918172 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.159509860173 0.149214159877 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.301103178227 0.161403998019 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.149805494499 0.0892212321368 168% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.576562013161 0.385218514788 150% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0368117903084 0.0692045440612 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.55208235274 0.275328986314 201% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104679939748 0.0653680567796 160% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.4325221239 153% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88274336283 184% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 15.0 7.22455752212 208% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 8.0 2.70907079646 295% => OK
Total topic words: 24.0 13.5995575221 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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