Claim: The best way to understand the character of a society is to examine the character of the men and women that the society chooses as its heroes or its role models.
Reason: Heroes and role models reveal a society's highest ideals.
The topic states here that character and morals of society is best understood by studying the character of heroes and its role models. Indisputably, role models and heroes are made by people, no one can establish one self on own that he/she is hero or role model of their society. This characteristic is defined by people. Nevertheless, in some cases heroes and role models not perfectly represents its their society. Thus, generally I disagree with the statement that characters of society is best understand by their ideals, and would like to argue that in many cases there are possibilities that all the good faces and role models not perfectly defines the society.
First of all, definition of role models and heroes have changed drastically over period of time. In past,people try to admire those people who achieved respect by doing kind and great work. In present, people make role model out of either from some actor or actress or from sports person who achieved great achievement in their respective field. This new definition of role model is quiet unappropriate as it stands. People try to emulate them and give title as a role model, but they do not know that they are not making any kind heart person or any other person. In today, everyone in public is different and in alone is different. So, this definition of role model heroes do not perfectly describes the mindset of society.
Furthermore, heroes and role models are being overhyped by media. In this fast changing society of social networking, any news about anything spread like virus. So, if anyone make anyone role model without even thinking about what he/she want to achieve in their life. And this overhyped role models are made even bigger by social media. Today, mostly role model of people are either any sports person or any celebrity. This is spreading widely across all over the wold. There can be possibilities that any one of this never ever have done anything for their society.
Moreover, many real heroes are being left unnoticed due to lack of popularity or due to media biases. In this case, it can be possible that the one which should get respect is left unnoticed. And people get disheartened by them. And will try to emulate the success of people like sports person or any other celebrity. The one who perfectly defines society's ideal is left unnoticed. And this not only the case but, there are lots more cases that definition of ideal is being changed and this not perfectly defines the society.
In conclusion, heroes or role models certainly have effect over people's mindset, but they do not perfectly defines society's mindset. There are possibilities that over media support can gain any person popularity but that person is not perfect role model. So, mindset of people is not defined by the role models or heroes but it defines by their own self.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...nd role models not perfectly represents its their society. Thus, generally I disagr...
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...nd heroes have changed drastically over period of time. In past,people try to admire those peo...
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Message: Did you mean: 'In the past'?
Suggestion: In the past
...hanged drastically over period of time. In past,people try to admire those people who a...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , people
...drastically over period of time. In past,people try to admire those people who achieved...
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Message: “So , if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... news about anything spread like virus. So, if anyone make anyone role model without e...
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Line 5, column 176, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'anyone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'makes'.
Suggestion: makes
...ything spread like virus. So, if anyone make anyone role model without even thinking...
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Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
...without even thinking about what he/she want to achieve in their life. And this over...
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Line 5, column 389, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...tly role model of people are either any sports person or any celebrity. This is spread...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...y to emulate the success of people like sports person or any other celebrity. The one ...
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Line 9, column 65, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
... role models certainly have effect over peoples mindset, but they do not perfectly defi...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'if', 'moreover', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'thus', 'in conclusion', 'first of all', 'in many cases', 'in some cases']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.269516728625 0.240241500013 112% => OK
Verbs: 0.156133828996 0.157235817809 99% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0650557620818 0.0880659088768 74% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0724907063197 0.0497285424764 146% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0334572490706 0.0444667217837 75% => OK
Prepositions: 0.128252788104 0.12292977631 104% => OK
Participles: 0.0408921933086 0.0406280797675 101% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.49570983677 2.79330140395 89% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0130111524164 0.030933414821 42% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0743494423792 0.0997080785238 75% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0130111524164 0.0249443105267 52% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0092936802974 0.0148568991511 63% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2855.0 2732.02544248 105% => OK
No of words: 488.0 452.878318584 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.85040983607 6.0361032391 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70007681154 4.58838876751 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.33606557377 0.366273622748 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.209016393443 0.280924506359 74% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.143442622951 0.200843997647 71% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.100409836066 0.132149295362 76% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49570983677 2.79330140395 89% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 219.290929204 92% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.41393442623 0.48968727796 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 46.4708285929 55.4138127331 84% => OK
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6194690265 136% => OK
Sentence length: 17.4285714286 23.380412469 75% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5796971836 59.4972553346 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.964285714 141.124799967 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4285714286 23.380412469 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.428571428571 0.674092028746 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.21349557522 192% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 38.3302107728 51.4728631049 74% => OK
Elegance: 1.67375886525 1.64882698954 102% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.448251997649 0.391690518653 114% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.094113071499 0.123202303941 76% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0759227639492 0.077325440228 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.457934043494 0.547984918172 84% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.130876537327 0.149214159877 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153254052901 0.161403998019 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123176916148 0.0892212321368 138% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.346698902224 0.385218514788 90% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0657210258265 0.0692045440612 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.310139695198 0.275328986314 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133063594397 0.0653680567796 204% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.4325221239 153% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.30420353982 113% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88274336283 123% => OK
Positive topic words: 15.0 7.22455752212 208% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 3.66592920354 136% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.70907079646 148% => OK
Total topic words: 24.0 13.5995575221 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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