Claim: The best way to understand the character of a society is to examine the character of the men and women that the society chooses as its heroes or its role models.
Reason: Heroes and role models reveal a society's highest ideals.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
To understand the character of people in the society, it is important to learn about role modals of the society. It is unwonted that people look towards the heros, who has done great job for the welfare of society or the sacrificed for society. People use characters of hearos as examples and inspire themselves or their children to be like them. Thus, heros of society does represent high ideals of society.
Lets take example of silicon valley of USA. Most of the famous tech geeks born and brought up in cities of silicon valley, such as Steve Jobs Apple inc CEO, Mark Zakanbarg Facebook CEO. People of silicon valley use these names to motivate themselves and want to become like them. It is obvious that when people like someone and accept him as a role modal, they want to know more about them and try to follow their habits. Therefore, it is not surprising people in silicon valley choose computer science as major and dream to become tech geeks. If we study character of these role modals, we can get an overall idea about society's character.
Let take a look of holistic city of India, Banaras. Banaras has most of many famous temples, and many spritual leaders bron or spent their like in this city. If we visit this city, we will see majority of people want to become spritually inclined, and they choose spritual leaders of the city as their gurus'. Even people from outside country , who like to progress in spritual journey prefer to visit Banaras and meet any guru. It makes much more cogent that by looking at the charaters of those role modals, we can get idea what people of this city are, and what they are willing to be in future.
On the other side, the presented recommnedation can't be accepted all in all as there are always some exceptions. No doubt people love to follow their role modals, but they may take exceptions of bad habits of their role modals. For example, Steve Jobs was very furious and very prompt to yell on people. Now people for whom he is role modal mostly don't want to be short temper like him, may be they just want to be successfull like him. In this case, by only examining role modals charater, will not give right idea of character of men or women in socity.
In conclusion, It is beneficial idea to study role modals as they represent highest values of society, but also considering exceptions of their not good habits and talk to people what actually they follow in the role modal will give better understanding.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...people for whom he is role modal mostly dont want to be short temper like him, may b...
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Line 7, column 388, Rule ID: MAY_BE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'maybe' (=perhaps)?
Suggestion: maybe
... dont want to be short temper like him, may be they just want to be successfull like h...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'represent the highest'.
Suggestion: represent the highest
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, look, may, so, therefore, thus, for example, in conclusion, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 33.0505617978 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 73.0 58.6224719101 125% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2033.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 441.0 442.535393258 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60997732426 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58257569496 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32375410317 2.79657885939 83% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 215.323595506 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498866213152 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 651.6 704.065955056 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.740449438202 270% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8307402042 60.3974514979 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8095238095 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 5.21951772744 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137674500765 0.243740707755 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0465702806959 0.0831039109588 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055407195827 0.0758088955206 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0865612022025 0.150359130593 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481409705426 0.0667264976115 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 12.1639044944 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 100.480337079 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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