Claim: Even though young people often receive the advice to “follow your dreams,” more emphasis should be placed on picking worthy goals.
Reason: Many people’s dreams are inherently selfish.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim AND the reason on which that claim is based.
One should pursue his/her dreams relentlessly, this is a popular jargon that pervades these days. There can be variety of dreams given the myriad variety of human thoughts. But, what is the whole purpose of a dream, if it serves nothing to human mankind. Hence, the dreams should be worthy enough. Hence, emphasis should be place on picking worthy dreams. Dreams being inherently selfish may not be the only reason to emphasize on the worthiness of the dream.
Its good to follow what one truly wants in life, but, emphasis should be given on the worthiness of one's goal. While, one should be given the latitude to think about what he/she wants to do, what one does should be warranted and should help the society in one or the other way.Even if it does not help the society, it should not harm the society. Hence, emphasis should be given on the worthiness of the goals.For instance, a young teenager told that he wants to become a Mafia when he was asked about his ambition in life. This surely is a matter of concern. Someone should emphasize on the worthiness of his dream. As one can infer, the teenager's dream was not only selfish but also a serious threat to the society.
Selfishness to some extent is good, but, if selfishness goes beyond morality, whatever one does becomes immoral.
Although, emphasis should be placed on picking worthy goals, peoples' selfishness should not be the only reason.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'hence', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'while', 'for instance']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.216606498195 0.240241500013 90% => OK
Verbs: 0.176895306859 0.157235817809 113% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0649819494585 0.0880659088768 74% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0397111913357 0.0497285424764 80% => OK
Pronouns: 0.028880866426 0.0444667217837 65% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0974729241877 0.12292977631 79% => OK
Participles: 0.0361010830325 0.0406280797675 89% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.39785410104 2.79330140395 86% => OK
Infinitives: 0.028880866426 0.030933414821 93% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.101083032491 0.0997080785238 101% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0541516245487 0.0249443105267 217% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.0252707581227 0.0148568991511 170% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1415.0 2732.02544248 52% => OK
No of words: 245.0 452.878318584 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.77551020408 6.0361032391 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.58838876751 86% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.383673469388 0.366273622748 105% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.212244897959 0.280924506359 76% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.138775510204 0.200843997647 69% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0734693877551 0.132149295362 56% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39785410104 2.79330140395 86% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 219.290929204 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.49387755102 0.48968727796 101% => OK
Word variations: 45.5943069734 55.4138127331 82% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6194690265 68% => OK
Sentence length: 17.5 23.380412469 75% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2618328799 59.4972553346 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.071428571 141.124799967 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 23.380412469 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.571428571429 0.674092028746 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.21349557522 96% => OK
Readability: 38.7244897959 51.4728631049 75% => OK
Elegance: 1.42647058824 1.64882698954 87% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303752085922 0.391690518653 78% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.155257526294 0.123202303941 126% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.13264604586 0.077325440228 172% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.568386306257 0.547984918172 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.229416151758 0.149214159877 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14172830929 0.161403998019 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0820865355969 0.0892212321368 92% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.221464609281 0.385218514788 57% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.19878319115 0.0692045440612 287% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202383684488 0.275328986314 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0908029854266 0.0653680567796 139% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.4325221239 105% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88274336283 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 7.22455752212 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.70907079646 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 8.0 13.5995575221 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 41.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.5 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.