Claim: Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive.
Reason: It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based
The above statement claims that governments must ensure that their major cities receive financial support they need in order to thrive. It is said that the reason for this is that it is primarily in cities that a nation’s cultural traditions are preserved and generated. The claim is somewhat reasonable but the reason given is totally fallacious.
It is completely agreeable to provide major cities the financial support they require as they are the major hubs of scientific and industrial development of the nation. It is their where all the inventions and discoveries take place. All the major universities are also situated at these cities, so all the important research work also takes place there. Other than this, it is the major cities where the largest organizations of a country functions. In the global scenario, these cities are the face of a country. So if these cities thrive, it is reflected directly in the socio-economic status of the country. So, it is prudent to support them financially.
However, the reason provided to support the claim is not feasible. To say that a nation’s cultural traditions are preserved and generated in major cities is completely misleading and untrue. There are several examples to contradict the said statement. Consider the cities of India like New Delhi and Bombay. The culture of these cities is very much similar to any other major city of the world. The people residing here wear western clothes and speak fluent English. They are very much accustomed with international brands and food chains. They lead an urbanized and westernized life style. So in order to understand the Indian culture and traditions, Mumbai or New Delhi should be the last choice.
The true culture of a nation dwells and flourishes in its small towns and villages. Hence, it is necessary to provide financial support to these hubs of traditional hubs as well. It is observed that many villages in the developing nations like India are extremely deprived of even most basic facilities like clean water and electricity. What is required is sustainable and equivocal management of government funds in order to ensure the complete development that is, on global as well as traditional fronts of the nation.
Hence, it would be right to agree with the claim and the governments of the nations should provide financial support to major cities and ensure their steady and sustainable growth and development. However, the reason fails to provide an appropriate support to the claim; it is still advisable to ensure the preservation of cultural traditions of a country as well by investing in the development of the small towns and villages.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'still', 'well', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.22520661157 0.240241500013 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.142561983471 0.157235817809 91% => OK
Adjectives: 0.134297520661 0.0880659088768 152% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0599173553719 0.0497285424764 120% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0433884297521 0.0444667217837 98% => OK
Prepositions: 0.099173553719 0.12292977631 81% => OK
Participles: 0.0268595041322 0.0406280797675 66% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.85987055563 2.79330140395 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0330578512397 0.030933414821 107% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.109504132231 0.0997080785238 110% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00826446280992 0.0249443105267 33% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00826446280992 0.0148568991511 56% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2682.0 2732.02544248 98% => OK
No of words: 439.0 452.878318584 97% => OK
Chars per words: 6.10933940774 6.0361032391 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57737117129 4.58838876751 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.375854214123 0.366273622748 103% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.282460136674 0.280924506359 101% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.200455580866 0.200843997647 100% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.152619589977 0.132149295362 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85987055563 2.79330140395 102% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 219.290929204 92% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.457858769932 0.48968727796 94% => OK
Word variations: 50.3714343799 55.4138127331 91% => OK
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6194690265 121% => OK
Sentence length: 17.56 23.380412469 75% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0320058737 59.4972553346 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.28 141.124799967 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.56 23.380412469 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.36 0.674092028746 53% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.21349557522 38% => OK
Readability: 45.8060136674 51.4728631049 89% => OK
Elegance: 1.42857142857 1.64882698954 87% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.562629320661 0.391690518653 144% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.12573157494 0.123202303941 102% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0883909969638 0.077325440228 114% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.529867368125 0.547984918172 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.162835546694 0.149214159877 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.214548933984 0.161403998019 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129457148202 0.0892212321368 145% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.469117710701 0.385218514788 122% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0538232041174 0.0692045440612 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.425052941023 0.275328986314 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.143394150192 0.0653680567796 219% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.4325221239 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88274336283 225% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 11.0 7.22455752212 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 9.0 2.70907079646 332% => OK
Total topic words: 21.0 13.5995575221 154% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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