Claim: Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive.
Reason: It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
According to the author, major cities of a nation preserve and generate the nation's cultural traditions, and that is why government should make sure that these cities are given their much needed financial support regarding this cause. The proposal to generate fund for preserving national traditions is worthy of laud. Every nation has its own culture that significes the country in greater extent. But to claim that it only major cities should be considered for taking further steps is a bit extreme. And I do not agree with the author's rationalization.
For any country, cultural traditions is a part of its soul. And every possible steps should be taken to preserve its essence. It is true that the major cities play a vital role in representing its traditions. But the major cities are not the only ones who work tirelessly to preserve and generate their cultural traditions. For every country, most of the people do not live in the major cities only. And in every country, every city of the country hold some significant traditions that are equally part of the nation.
Let's take India for example. If we consider the major cities of India; we get Mumbai, Delhi, Kolkata and may be one or two more cities. According to the author these cities try to preserve the nation's culture. And that is true. But are they the only ones who practice the cultural tradition of the nation? Or are they superior in practicing than any other city in practicing their traditions? For a country as India, where there are somewhat 27 languages spoken by its people; we can assume how diverse its cultural traditions would be. In this case, the government should make its decision on the basis of thorough observation. Whether only major cities play a role in preserving their traditions or other cities take part in the matter too should be considered by the government. And if the government makes the decision in accord with the author's reasoning and focus only for the cultural development of Delhi and Mumbai and neglect other cities, people might be deprived of many other traditions of India which might not be in practice there, but is in abundance in smaller cities of the country. And if the government do not try to help the other cities in order to preserve their ethnical traditions, these practices might be lost. And the bigger loss would be for the country.
The government should do in their position to support the minor cities financially to thrive also. By doing so, not only they would preserve their traditions, they can help the economy too. The cities which are culturally rich but financially deprived; with the help from government they can bolster their practice and it is possible to attract tourists. And if the government takes interest in the matter, private sectors will hopefully come forward too.
In conclusion, while it would be a great approach from government to give financial support for further development of the nation's cultural tradition, it would not be wise to only include major cities in consideration. The government should make an informed decision. The government should not make any decision on the conjecture that major cities are only responsible and capable of preserving their tradition. The government must evaluate other cities' contribution in the matter too before making any final decision.
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...s that are equally part of the nation. Lets take India for example. If we consi...
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...ditions, these practices might be lost. And the bigger loss would be for the countr...
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... the minor cities financially to thrive also. By doing so, not only they would prese...
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... too before making any final decision.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'may', 'regarding', 'so', 'while', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'it is true']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.225859247136 0.240241500013 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.153846153846 0.157235817809 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0965630114566 0.0880659088768 110% => OK
Adverbs: 0.050736497545 0.0497285424764 102% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0490998363339 0.0444667217837 110% => OK
Prepositions: 0.106382978723 0.12292977631 87% => OK
Participles: 0.0343698854337 0.0406280797675 85% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.66545359313 2.79330140395 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0229132569558 0.030933414821 74% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.112929623568 0.0997080785238 113% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0360065466448 0.0249443105267 144% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0147299509002 0.0148568991511 99% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3394.0 2732.02544248 124% => OK
No of words: 560.0 452.878318584 124% => OK
Chars per words: 6.06071428571 6.0361032391 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.8645985582 4.58838876751 106% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.35 0.366273622748 96% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.264285714286 0.280924506359 94% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.196428571429 0.200843997647 98% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.114285714286 0.132149295362 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66545359313 2.79330140395 95% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 219.290929204 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.4 0.48968727796 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 46.7936384248 55.4138127331 84% => OK
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6194690265 150% => OK
Sentence length: 18.064516129 23.380412469 77% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.1010723272 59.4972553346 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.483870968 141.124799967 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.064516129 23.380412469 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.322580645161 0.674092028746 48% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.21349557522 230% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 44.4930875576 51.4728631049 86% => OK
Elegance: 1.44516129032 1.64882698954 88% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.465192055643 0.391690518653 119% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.110577069293 0.123202303941 90% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.101403197535 0.077325440228 131% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.48195578684 0.547984918172 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.162371658181 0.149214159877 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.178327166679 0.161403998019 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0857590144738 0.0892212321368 96% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.553673594362 0.385218514788 144% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0779312196083 0.0692045440612 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.355580806834 0.275328986314 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324187913682 0.0653680567796 50% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.4325221239 144% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30420353982 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88274336283 246% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 14.0 7.22455752212 194% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 11.0 2.70907079646 406% => Less neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 28.0 13.5995575221 206% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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