Claim : The importance of multidisciplinary education is overrated in today's times.
Reason : Education should be focused on preparation for a specific career path and thus students should be encouraged to only pursue a single area of study.
I agree with the claim but the reason provided for support of the claim is according to me is wrong. To understand the topic, first of all we need to know what is multidisciplinary education? Why is it necessary? It is explained in following subsequent paragraphs.
So, the multidisciplinary education is like a certain student is working in a museum, so he/she needs to place things according to their history. For that, he needs to know history briefly so that he can explain it to the tourists who visit to the museum. He needs to have the good communication skills to explain all the historical events interestingly. Also, he needs to know the archeology to understand the fossils of the Dinosaurs or any other extinct animal species. So, the multidisciplinary education is the education in which a person needs to know all subsequent information about the related fields. For example, there are very less number of people who might know that the refrigerators and air conditioners are made by the mechanical engineer, but for the design he might not only need to know the mechanical related terms, he should know the terms related to electronics so that he can make a refrigerator or air conditioner with higher efficiency.
As reason states, if the education is focused only on a specific career path and also the student is forced to pursue a single area of study, then the person might not be the work effectively. For example, the previous mechanical engineer is working on the design of the refrigerator, so for the every small changes he needs to call the another expert in the electronics engineering, which is very expensive for the nations like US where the manpower is very less. But, it can be fairly good for the nations like the India where the manpower is abundant.
In the conclusion we can say that the multidisciplinary education is important in today's times. But, the education should not be focused on preparation for a specific career path and should not force students to only pursue a single area of study.
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'briefly', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'for example', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.205263157895 0.240241500013 85% => OK
Verbs: 0.157894736842 0.157235817809 100% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0894736842105 0.0880659088768 102% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0578947368421 0.0497285424764 116% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0447368421053 0.0444667217837 101% => OK
Prepositions: 0.102631578947 0.12292977631 83% => OK
Participles: 0.0289473684211 0.0406280797675 71% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.05143467932 2.79330140395 109% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0473684210526 0.030933414821 153% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.136842105263 0.0997080785238 137% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0263157894737 0.0249443105267 105% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0210526315789 0.0148568991511 142% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2043.0 2732.02544248 75% => OK
No of words: 349.0 452.878318584 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.85386819484 6.0361032391 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.58838876751 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.335243553009 0.366273622748 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.240687679083 0.280924506359 86% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.169054441261 0.200843997647 84% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.131805157593 0.132149295362 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05143467932 2.79330140395 109% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 219.290929204 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.452722063037 0.48968727796 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 46.1247538626 55.4138127331 83% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6194690265 73% => OK
Sentence length: 23.2666666667 23.380412469 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.0429241548 59.4972553346 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.2 141.124799967 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2666666667 23.380412469 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6 0.674092028746 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.21349557522 0% => OK
Readability: 47.335434575 51.4728631049 92% => OK
Elegance: 1.29292929293 1.64882698954 78% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.395308327136 0.391690518653 101% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.187489106092 0.123202303941 152% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0936274843869 0.077325440228 121% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.642908480981 0.547984918172 117% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.132886858547 0.149214159877 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.188543773517 0.161403998019 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138209424551 0.0892212321368 155% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.503012427822 0.385218514788 131% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0564379525733 0.0692045440612 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.346096266229 0.275328986314 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.1503296919 0.0653680567796 230% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.4325221239 77% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.30420353982 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88274336283 123% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 7.22455752212 97% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.70907079646 148% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 13.5995575221 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.