Claim: Knowing about the past cannot help people to make important decisions today.
Reason: We are not able to make connections between current events and past events until we have some distance from both.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
This topic raises a contoversial issue whether, knowing about the past can help in making decisions in present, or rather that it does not helps in making important decisions today. Indisputably, there are some important decisons that are supposed to be made today which does not have any connection with the past and so, they does not helps in making better decisions in the current. Nevertheless, there are many occurences where the past experience guides us for the proper decisions to make today. Thus, I generally agree that the past experiences helps us making decisions in the present.
Firstly, the events that occurs in our day to day life are generally a format that we follow regularly. To illustrate this further, let us take an example of the schedule of a child who goes to school regularly, does his homework regularly and follow the some routine almost everyday. Therefore, now the child must be habituated with that and must be absolutly sure from the past experiences about to follow his schedule regularly. This can also be applied in the other important decisions that we make in our life, the past guides us about the mistakes that we made at that time, just so, we don't repeat them in the present.
Also, the reason provided by the author for his contention is that people are cloudy with the past and present and that does not helps in making decision. There must be some distant and we must be able to assess both the conditions lucidly. However, this reason of the author is indefensible in a way that people are not able to make distant. To understand it better, take an example of Steve Jobbs, who was removed from the company he created. Therefore, when the next time he took care about not repeating the past mistakes and kicked them out.
Considerably, there are many decisions in which the past does not helps much, because it is a completely new venture the one is pursuing and there is no account of such event in his past. So, that is the point where past does not helps. But, the inference of the past always stays with the person and highlights his path. Also, the occurences of the past can sometimes be the memories, or the slight pleasures that you had which makes your life zealous.
To sum it, the statement that the past occurences does not helps in making current decisions is indefensible. On the contrary, the overwhelming evidences shows that the past occurences helps in making the current decisions for the better good. Thus, untill some specific measures are provided, or some cases are considered the conclusion that the past occurences helps in determining the current decision holds credit.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 140, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'help'
Suggestion: help
... in present, or rather that it does not helps in making important decisions today. In...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 328, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'do'
Suggestion: do
...y connection with the past and so, they does not helps in making better decisions in...
^^^^
Line 1, column 337, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'help'
Suggestion: help
...ion with the past and so, they does not helps in making better decisions in the curre...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 436, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experience'.
Suggestion: experience
...ss, there are many occurences where the past experience guides us for the proper decisions to m...
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Line 1, column 535, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experiences'.
Suggestion: experiences
...today. Thus, I generally agree that the past experiences helps us making decisions in the presen...
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Line 1, column 561, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to make' or 'make'.
Suggestion: to make; make
...gree that the past experiences helps us making decisions in the present. Firstly, th...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 256, Rule ID: THE_SOME_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
...s his homework regularly and follow the some routine almost everyday. Therefore, now...
^^^^
Line 2, column 276, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...arly and follow the some routine almost everyday. Therefore, now the child must be habit...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 376, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experiences'.
Suggestion: experiences
...hat and must be absolutly sure from the past experiences about to follow his schedule regularly....
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Line 2, column 594, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... that we made at that time, just so, we dont repeat them in the present. Also, the...
^^^^
Line 3, column 361, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'betters', 'wells'?
Suggestion: betters; wells
... able to make distant. To understand it better, take an example of Steve Jobbs, who wa...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 67, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'help'
Suggestion: help
...ny decisions in which the past does not helps much, because it is a completely new ve...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 189, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[4]
Message: “So , that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s no account of such event in his past. So, that is the point where past does not helps....
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 231, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'help'
Suggestion: help
..., that is the point where past does not helps. But, the inference of the past always ...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 60, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'help'
Suggestion: help
...ement that the past occurences does not helps in making current decisions is indefens...
^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'however', 'if', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'on the contrary']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.160396039604 0.240241500013 67% => OK
Verbs: 0.182178217822 0.157235817809 116% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0970297029703 0.0880659088768 110% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0792079207921 0.0497285424764 159% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0554455445545 0.0444667217837 125% => OK
Prepositions: 0.10495049505 0.12292977631 85% => OK
Participles: 0.039603960396 0.0406280797675 97% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.56375406758 2.79330140395 92% => OK
Infinitives: 0.019801980198 0.030933414821 64% => OK
Particles: 0.0019801980198 0.0016655270985 119% => OK
Determiners: 0.132673267327 0.0997080785238 133% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0138613861386 0.0249443105267 56% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.019801980198 0.0148568991511 133% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2648.0 2732.02544248 97% => OK
No of words: 457.0 452.878318584 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.7943107221 6.0361032391 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62358717085 4.58838876751 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.304157549234 0.366273622748 83% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.216630196937 0.280924506359 77% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.17943107221 0.200843997647 89% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.126914660832 0.132149295362 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56375406758 2.79330140395 92% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 219.290929204 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.437636761488 0.48968727796 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 48.3913827254 55.4138127331 87% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6194690265 97% => OK
Sentence length: 22.85 23.380412469 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.861958658 59.4972553346 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.4 141.124799967 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.85 23.380412469 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.55 0.674092028746 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.21349557522 288% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 44.5130196937 51.4728631049 86% => OK
Elegance: 0.9625 1.64882698954 58% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.427898222224 0.391690518653 109% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.168270757459 0.123202303941 137% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0835279567656 0.077325440228 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.623143956945 0.547984918172 114% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.116221877254 0.149214159877 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.191331684576 0.161403998019 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050015766774 0.0892212321368 56% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.50566126652 0.385218514788 131% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0492232323486 0.0692045440612 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.304283872417 0.275328986314 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480372331936 0.0653680567796 73% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.4325221239 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.30420353982 94% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88274336283 123% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 7.22455752212 97% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.66592920354 109% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.70907079646 148% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.5995575221 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.