Claim: Many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws and the legal system.
Reason: Laws cannot change what is in people's hearts or minds.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
Laws serve as the backbone of the judicial system of any society.They serve to fulfill the goal of equality for all. But,not in all cases are they in congruence with the actual problems and may sometimes compel one to go against his mind or his heart.
To support my point ,lets take an example of a divorce case which ,according to the court favors the mother, allowing her to take responsibility of her children and the father has to give a large chunk of his property also.It may be possible that the judgement is biased and is against the father.
Take another example of a murder case which is going on for years in the courts .Wouldn't the family of the one who was the victim want to take some actoin on their own(which may be against the law) than to sit idle and see the culprit released or not given an appropriate sentence in accordance with his crime?
The inner self of people is prone to ideas which may be constructive or destructive.Sometimes these are satisfied, while in most of the cases they aren't.Some cases, which can easily be solved by mututal agreement are often brought into the law and stretched interminately, which is opposite to the interests of both the factions.Like the cases of
minor disputes between the lands of two farmers where one wants to confiscate the land of the other.In many such cases lands of both may be annexed(by the government)or the judgement is against the other.
I agree that abiding by the laws is a must for any individual of a democratic society as these are the foundations on which the society is layed upon.However,not in all cases can these laws solely be used for the purpose of resolving a dispute and ,may even worsen a case.
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...r the purpose of resolving a dispute and ,may even worsen a case.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'may', 'so', 'while', 'as to', 'in all cases']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.205521472393 0.240241500013 86% => OK
Verbs: 0.171779141104 0.157235817809 109% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0644171779141 0.0880659088768 73% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0306748466258 0.0497285424764 62% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0337423312883 0.0444667217837 76% => OK
Prepositions: 0.144171779141 0.12292977631 117% => OK
Participles: 0.0368098159509 0.0406280797675 91% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.81518497362 2.79330140395 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0337423312883 0.030933414821 109% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.159509202454 0.0997080785238 160% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0276073619632 0.0249443105267 111% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0276073619632 0.0148568991511 186% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1692.0 2732.02544248 62% => OK
No of words: 302.0 452.878318584 67% => More words wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60264900662 6.0361032391 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.58838876751 91% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.281456953642 0.366273622748 77% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.215231788079 0.280924506359 77% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.135761589404 0.200843997647 68% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0894039735099 0.132149295362 68% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81518497362 2.79330140395 101% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 219.290929204 74% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539735099338 0.48968727796 110% => OK
Word variations: 55.6849736404 55.4138127331 100% => OK
How many sentences: 6.0 20.6194690265 29% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 50.3333333333 23.380412469 215% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 143.774997826 59.4972553346 242% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 282.0 141.124799967 200% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 50.3333333333 23.380412469 215% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.33333333333 0.674092028746 198% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.94800884956 121% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.21349557522 364% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 71.8565121413 51.4728631049 140% => OK
Elegance: 1.63636363636 1.64882698954 99% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.475023437856 0.391690518653 121% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.262314646807 0.123202303941 213% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.116805534776 0.077325440228 151% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.905888732549 0.547984918172 165% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.149111033418 0.149214159877 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.30057884035 0.161403998019 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656201283091 0.0892212321368 74% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.404698912949 0.385218514788 105% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0602510665018 0.0692045440612 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.324022677557 0.275328986314 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0248926174958 0.0653680567796 38% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.4325221239 29% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.30420353982 57% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88274336283 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 2.0 7.22455752212 28% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.70907079646 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 5.0 13.5995575221 37% => More topic words wanted.
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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