Claim: Many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws and the legal system.
Reason: Laws cannot change what is in people’s hearts or minds.
Law determines, whether people’s value or status, which is right or wrong for some logical reason. It categorizes from the moral reasons to disclosure of venality. People who are victim or people who cause crime are going to be judged by adjudicator. Statement claims that because law doesn’t comprehend about people’s mind, many problems of modern society can’t be solved by laws. When adjudicator makes a decision, or a layer vindicate his customer, it is not easy to solve the problem; however, it is more difficult to solve the problem if there is no laws or there is no boundary of legal system. Therefore, there should be laws and legal system to tackle the problem in modern society.
To begin with, laws or legal system is enough to solve the problems since legal system has been struggled by administration; negligible statement has been obliterated by inspectors or judges who knows more on judicious decision. For example, whenever people are conceived artifice, adjudicators will understand the situation and look up the details of connection between previous judges and present. Thus, statements from the laws are very clear and very much detailed.
Moreover, for the people who have probity and integrity, legal system should protect with strict laws. If people are reckless about their profit and there is not a single legal system to embody them, then it will cause the problem that they are doing and eventually affect people with probity negatively. Hence, to protect people with integrity, there should be a strict laws.
Admittedly, modern society will have different aspect of vision from haphazard connection. As more technologies develops, there will be more complicated ethical issues on that. Even sometimes, legal system didn’t make any statement from recent circumstances. Problems that criminals make are now more complicated from the previous problem. However, that doesn’t mean that laws can’t make any decision from that circumstances. There are one hundreds or one thousands of philosophical or moral reason that people used to call as illegal and immoral issue. Legal system can go further about the reasons why the criminal does. Hence, there is no such problem that legal system can’t extricate any issues.
In conclusion, clearly, there are many diverse entanglement of moral and philosophical issues confronts toward legal system and those circumstances should be judged by laws or legal system since it will be more clear-cut to help people to understand and law is the protection of people’s heart, not the barrier.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 177, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...asons to disclosure of venality. People who are victim or people who cause crime are go...
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Line 1, column 564, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are no laws'?
Suggestion: there are no laws
... more difficult to solve the problem if there is no laws or there is no boundary of legal system...
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Line 5, column 372, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'law'?
Suggestion: law
...ith integrity, there should be a strict laws. Admittedly, modern society will hav...
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Line 7, column 452, Rule ID: A_HUNDREDS[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. Consider using: 'one hundred'
Suggestion: one hundred
...sion from that circumstances. There are one hundreds or one thousands of philosophical or mo...
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Line 7, column 452, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one hundred', 'a hundred', or simply 'hundreds'?
Suggestion: one hundred; a hundred; hundreds
...sion from that circumstances. There are one hundreds or one thousands of philosophical or mo...
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Line 7, column 468, Rule ID: A_HUNDREDS[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. Consider using: 'one thousand'
Suggestion: one thousand
...ircumstances. There are one hundreds or one thousands of philosophical or moral reason that p...
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Line 7, column 468, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one thousand', 'a thousand', or simply 'thousands'?
Suggestion: one thousand; a thousand; thousands
...ircumstances. There are one hundreds or one thousands of philosophical or moral reason that p...
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Line 7, column 468, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: 'one thousand'.
Suggestion: one thousand
...ircumstances. There are one hundreds or one thousands of philosophical or moral reason that peop...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, look, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, even so, for example, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2203.0 2235.4752809 99% => OK
No of words: 411.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3600973236 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88417140905 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.476885644769 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 683.1 704.065955056 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.740449438202 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 65.391477667 60.3974514979 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.904761905 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38095238095 5.21951772744 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.13820224719 214% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.41585838503 0.243740707755 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129949006095 0.0831039109588 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0931756099372 0.0758088955206 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254354843723 0.150359130593 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115734739331 0.0667264976115 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.1392134831 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 100.480337079 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.