College students should be encouraged to pursue subjects that interest them rather than the courses that seem most likely to lead to jobs.
The author contends that college students should be encourgaed to pursue subjects that interest them rather than the courses that seem most likely to lead to jobs. Some people may believe that pursuing own interest subject is more important than choosing the courses which lead to jobs. It is because that several cases which show develping own interest leads success. However, the following essay will argue that the author's claim might not always hold true and present the following reasons to support this point of view.
Admittedly, it seems that the pursing subjects that college students are interested in have a lot of merits. First of all, It could motivate them to study hard constantly. As people know, motivation is the crucial factor to concentrate on own's dream. Accordingly, college students might possible manage their scores well and it finally has positive effects such as obtaining a job opportunity, entering the grad school for mastering their own's major field and so on. Thus, it seems plausble that collge students should pursue their own interest subjects for this reason.
Nowadays, however, there is only few people who leading success by pursing their own interest. Most collge students couldn't plan their future which is right after collge life. So, the college has a resposibility to lead them in right way. Moreover, the college students often confuse recognizing between dream and reality. If they choose their subject just for curiosity, the result will be quite disaster. The real world is too competitive to gain a job whether he/she wants or not. To gain a job they want, they should study job-specified subjects. For example, the one who want to work with the technology firm, he/she should know technology concepts such as physics, math and engineering. If he was required to pursue the subjects that he interested in, he might choose ramdomly by following his mind such as universe, soccer and arts which are not leading him to jobs. To sum up, pursuing the subjects they interest seems ideal but it not assure college students' future.
In conclusion, I believe that college students should be encourged to pursue the job-related subjects and the college should lead them by offering a well-rounded curriculum. Therefore, the author's claim is not always hold true in certain practical cases.
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Discourse Markers used:
['accordingly', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'well', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'first of all', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.219858156028 0.240241500013 92% => OK
Verbs: 0.189125295508 0.157235817809 120% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0874704491726 0.0880659088768 99% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0685579196217 0.0497285424764 138% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0614657210402 0.0444667217837 138% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0898345153664 0.12292977631 73% => OK
Participles: 0.0401891252955 0.0406280797675 99% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.54811984875 2.79330140395 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0354609929078 0.030933414821 115% => OK
Particles: 0.00236406619385 0.0016655270985 142% => OK
Determiners: 0.0709219858156 0.0997080785238 71% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0307328605201 0.0249443105267 123% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0189125295508 0.0148568991511 127% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2344.0 2732.02544248 86% => OK
No of words: 381.0 452.878318584 84% => OK
Chars per words: 6.15223097113 6.0361032391 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.58838876751 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.385826771654 0.366273622748 105% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.293963254593 0.280924506359 105% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.196850393701 0.200843997647 98% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0971128608924 0.132149295362 73% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54811984875 2.79330140395 91% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 219.290929204 92% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527559055118 0.48968727796 108% => OK
Word variations: 58.1470177468 55.4138127331 105% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6194690265 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.1428571429 23.380412469 78% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0380836468 59.4972553346 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.619047619 141.124799967 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1428571429 23.380412469 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.809523809524 0.674092028746 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.21349557522 38% => OK
Readability: 47.5391826022 51.4728631049 92% => OK
Elegance: 1.0962962963 1.64882698954 66% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.537702620233 0.391690518653 137% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.112188512614 0.123202303941 91% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0736802041601 0.077325440228 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.442588815854 0.547984918172 81% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.150308764107 0.149214159877 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.180054297348 0.161403998019 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.18257736222 0.0892212321368 205% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.35068248989 0.385218514788 91% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0241430876702 0.0692045440612 35% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.387035440921 0.275328986314 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.140943686233 0.0653680567796 216% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.4325221239 144% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.30420353982 57% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88274336283 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 7.22455752212 166% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 3.66592920354 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.5995575221 103% => OK
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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