Competition is required to be successful, not competition !
Everybody wants to be successful in life, they need to prove themselves that they are better than others, this is competition, bringing out the best in people. However, without cooperation you cannot lead. Cooperation is helping people, understanding them, it shows person's leadership skills. So, both are required for a person to be successful in any field.
There are various stages in life, in which competition can help you upto a point. Consider an example, where you do not have cooperation skills but have great competition spirit. Having worked really hard for years and years, now you are the CEO of the company. What now? What can you achieve with your competition spirit? You need to have cooperation spirit now; to understand your team, listen to their problems, make sure they are are happy working. Thus, it is upto a point, competition spirit will help you, after that cooperation spirit is required.
There are various leaders that with help of cooperation has achieved wonders. For example, the great leader mahatma Gandhi, who with the help of cooperation of people and with non violence brought independence to India.
However, some people will say competition is not required; leaders will find their path, they know how to come up. I disagree, you need to have sense of competition also, otherwise how can you prove that you are better than others. And most importantly, how to decide whom to select leaders. Competition brings out best in you. Microsoft intellectuals would not have created Bing if there was not Google, do you think Micheal Phelps would be this good if there was not competition?
Therefore, both competition and cooperation spirit are must to have, to be successful in life. If not need competition, make sure that your competition is with yourself, you have to become better than you were today. And amalgamate with this the cooperation spirit and no body can stop you from being successful in any field
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: are
...isten to their problems, make sure they are are happy working. Thus, it is upto a point...
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Suggestion: must; have to
... competition and cooperation spirit are must to have, to be successful in life. If not ...
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Message: Did you mean 'nobody'?
Suggestion: nobody
...te with this the cooperation spirit and no body can stop you from being successful in a...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'really', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'for example']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.208 0.240241500013 87% => OK
Verbs: 0.2 0.157235817809 127% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0586666666667 0.0880659088768 67% => OK
Adverbs: 0.048 0.0497285424764 97% => OK
Pronouns: 0.08 0.0444667217837 180% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0906666666667 0.12292977631 74% => OK
Participles: 0.032 0.0406280797675 79% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.72526813186 2.79330140395 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0373333333333 0.030933414821 121% => OK
Particles: 0.008 0.0016655270985 480% => OK
Determiners: 0.0533333333333 0.0997080785238 53% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0293333333333 0.0249443105267 118% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0266666666667 0.0148568991511 179% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1953.0 2732.02544248 71% => OK
No of words: 325.0 452.878318584 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.00923076923 6.0361032391 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.58838876751 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.326153846154 0.366273622748 89% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.233846153846 0.280924506359 83% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.169230769231 0.200843997647 84% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.129230769231 0.132149295362 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72526813186 2.79330140395 98% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 219.290929204 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510769230769 0.48968727796 104% => OK
Word variations: 52.6317101953 55.4138127331 95% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6194690265 102% => OK
Sentence length: 15.4761904762 23.380412469 66% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1920199189 59.4972553346 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0 141.124799967 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4761904762 23.380412469 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.428571428571 0.674092028746 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.21349557522 58% => OK
Readability: 38.8608058608 51.4728631049 75% => OK
Elegance: 1.0081300813 1.64882698954 61% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.379302279767 0.391690518653 97% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0938391976879 0.123202303941 76% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0786966684649 0.077325440228 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.479304826658 0.547984918172 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.150066889462 0.149214159877 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131467704298 0.161403998019 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103966634904 0.0892212321368 117% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.241862407838 0.385218514788 63% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.102264532008 0.0692045440612 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248616730725 0.275328986314 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122063439863 0.0653680567796 187% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.4325221239 163% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.30420353982 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88274336283 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 14.0 7.22455752212 194% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.5995575221 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.