The desire of corporations to maximize profits creates conflict with the general welfare of the nation at large
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the opinion stated above. Support your views with reasons and/or examples from your own experience, observations or reading.
Any corporation, big or small works for the welfare of the nation rather than
hindering the growth of the nation. I do not agree that the intent of maximization
of profit can impede the welfare of the nation. In fact, the nation is implicitly
getting benefited from these profits. The amounts of turnovers of the
companies are used in the form of tax for nation's development. This money is
used in various aspects such as relief funds, building schools, hospitals,
roads and many other basic requirements of the public.
A simple scenario, a company can gain profits only if it is well adapted by the
public i.e if the company facilitates the customer in an efficient manner,
customer will look forward for the services and will continue to use them. This
entire scenario is on the whole a cycle where the company facilitates, public is
benefited and the company grows with respect to welfare of the nation.
With highly competitive web, every company desires to maintain a high position
and maximize its profits. And as stated, that the competition is very high, every
company tries to attract as many customers by offer various schemes,
discounts and try to prove the efficacy of their products or services. Every
company is in a competition to improve their product in terms of quality,
service, timely delivery, loyalty with their customers and many other aspects.
Consider the generation of online shopping, all famous online stores namely
Flipkart, Amazon, Jabong, Myntra and many other are in high competition with
each other to be number 1 in the market by gaining maximum customers and
ultimately increasing their profits. For this purpose, they offer many discounts,
timely sales, cashback offers, on-time and fastest delivery and many other
features. These features attract the customer because the service is really
reliable and not fraudulent.
Also, enhance the profits in not a cakewalk. It requires tremendous efforts and
diligent analysis. Thus, to make profits and attract more customers,
companies usually perform surveys so as to know what exactly is expected my
the public. Thus, working or improving the service or product on the basis of
public demand is greatly beneficial for the welfare of the nation.
If the companies continue to provide such alluring services where the public is
benefited by not have go out in sun or rain to shop and where every day to day
neccessity is available a click away, its definitely enhancing the welfare of the
nation.
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...ation. In fact, the nation is implicitly getting benefited from these profits. Th...
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...profits. The amounts of turnovers of the companies are used in the form of tax fo...
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...x for nations development. This money is used in various aspects such as relief f...
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...lief funds, building schools, hospitals, roads and many other basic requirements ...
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...rofits only if it is well adapted by the public i.e if the company facilitates th...
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...if the company facilitates the customer in an efficient manner, customer will look forward for the s...
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...tes the customer in an efficient manner, customer will look forward for the servi...
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...ices and will continue to use them. This entire scenario is on the whole a cycle ...
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...where the company facilitates, public is benefited and the company grows with res...
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...pany desires to maintain a high position and maximize its profits. And as stated,...
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...that the competition is very high, every company tries to attract as many custome...
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...many customers by offer various schemes, discounts and try to prove the efficacy ...
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...acy of their products or services. Every company is in a competition to improve t...
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...prove their product in terms of quality, service, timely delivery, loyalty with t...
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...hopping, all famous online stores namely Flipkart, Amazon, Jabong, Myntra and man...
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... many other are in high competition with each other to be number 1 in the market ...
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... market by gaining maximum customers and ultimately increasing their profits. For...
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...this purpose, they offer many discounts, timely sales, cashback offers, on-time a...
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...time and fastest delivery and many other features. These features attract the cus...
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...e customer because the service is really reliable and not fraudulent. Also, enha...
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...walk. It requires tremendous efforts and diligent analysis. Thus, to make profits...
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...make profits and attract more customers, companies usually perform surveys so as ...
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...o as to know what exactly is expected my the public. Thus, working or improving t...
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...g the service or product on the basis of public demand is greatly beneficial for ...
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...ch alluring services where the public is benefited by not have go out in sun or r...
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... rain to shop and where every day to day neccessity is available a click away, it...
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... neccessity is available a click away, its definitely enhancing the welfare of the...
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... definitely enhancing the welfare of the nation.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'if', 'look', 'really', 'so', 'thus', 'well', 'as to', 'in fact', 'such as', 'on the whole', 'with respect to']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.2647702407 0.240241500013 110% => OK
Verbs: 0.135667396061 0.157235817809 86% => OK
Adjectives: 0.089715536105 0.0880659088768 102% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0525164113786 0.0497285424764 106% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0262582056893 0.0444667217837 59% => OK
Prepositions: 0.115973741794 0.12292977631 94% => OK
Participles: 0.035010940919 0.0406280797675 86% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.63508255167 2.79330140395 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0262582056893 0.030933414821 85% => OK
Particles: 0.00218818380744 0.0016655270985 131% => OK
Determiners: 0.122538293217 0.0997080785238 123% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00875273522976 0.0249443105267 35% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00875273522976 0.0148568991511 59% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2535.0 2732.02544248 93% => OK
No of words: 411.0 452.878318584 91% => OK
Chars per words: 6.16788321168 6.0361032391 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.58838876751 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.406326034063 0.366273622748 111% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.335766423358 0.280924506359 120% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.189781021898 0.200843997647 94% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.111922141119 0.132149295362 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63508255167 2.79330140395 94% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 219.290929204 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518248175182 0.48968727796 106% => OK
Word variations: 58.0667172541 55.4138127331 105% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6194690265 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.8333333333 23.380412469 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.9260049484 59.4972553346 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.833333333 141.124799967 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 23.380412469 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 0.674092028746 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 33.0 4.94800884956 667% => There are something wrong with the essay format.
Language errors: 32.0 5.21349557522 614% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 56.4099756691 51.4728631049 110% => OK
Elegance: 1.9387755102 1.64882698954 118% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.483290314791 0.391690518653 123% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.151060211051 0.123202303941 123% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0929190029781 0.077325440228 120% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.802388344232 0.547984918172 146% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.250473801413 0.149214159877 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.213051005988 0.161403998019 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114329225341 0.0892212321368 128% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.11521959726 0.385218514788 30% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.119805834151 0.0692045440612 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165467150483 0.275328986314 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115265509005 0.0653680567796 176% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.4325221239 144% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.30420353982 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88274336283 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 7.22455752212 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 3.66592920354 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.5995575221 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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