Every individual in society has responsibility to obey just laws and to disobey and resist unjust laws
Imagine a life without laws - people not following the traffic signals, leading to accidents! Laws are imposed in with a purpose of bringing order to life. They might appear as an unnecessary in the face, but not having them can lead to catastrophic consequences.
There are laws related to pollution balance. The government has imposed certain laws for factories pertaining to the limits of harmful gases that can be released into the atmosphere. It is the responsibility of the factory owners to follow them. Not abiding by the laws can have detrimental effects on the neighboring societies. The effects can, in some cases, be fatal. Following the laws is necessary for the well being of the individual as well as the society.
However, the nature of laws is not always just. The laws related to reservations in government offices or colleges based on caste are not justified. Merit should be the factor to be taken into consideration for these things. Laws like these are unjust for the people who don’t have reservations and they are deprived of opportunities in spite of being talented. In India, there are seats reserved on the basis of caste. So a student with 95 marks but no reservation does not get admission, but a student with 80 marks but reservation gets admission. This is very unjust and should be resisted.
I completely agree with the author. The purpose of rules is to act as guidelines in life, not to hinder your progress. So people should follow the laws which are justified. At the same time they should raise their voices against the unjust laws.
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...their voices against the unjust laws.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'well', 'as well as', 'in some cases', 'in spite of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.245033112583 0.240241500013 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.185430463576 0.157235817809 118% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0397350993377 0.0880659088768 45% => Some adjectives wanted.
Adverbs: 0.0496688741722 0.0497285424764 100% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0298013245033 0.0444667217837 67% => OK
Prepositions: 0.12582781457 0.12292977631 102% => OK
Participles: 0.0728476821192 0.0406280797675 179% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.79206449472 2.79330140395 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0331125827815 0.030933414821 107% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.112582781457 0.0997080785238 113% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0298013245033 0.0249443105267 119% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00993377483444 0.0148568991511 67% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1615.0 2732.02544248 59% => OK
No of words: 270.0 452.878318584 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.98148148148 6.0361032391 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.58838876751 88% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.333333333333 0.366273622748 91% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.240740740741 0.280924506359 86% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.159259259259 0.200843997647 79% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.125925925926 0.132149295362 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79206449472 2.79330140395 100% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 219.290929204 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544444444444 0.48968727796 111% => OK
Word variations: 54.3019040098 55.4138127331 98% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6194690265 97% => OK
Sentence length: 13.5 23.380412469 58% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.729481559 59.4972553346 53% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.75 141.124799967 57% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5 23.380412469 58% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.4 0.674092028746 59% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.21349557522 96% => OK
Readability: 37.5740740741 51.4728631049 73% => OK
Elegance: 1.675 1.64882698954 102% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235667720078 0.391690518653 60% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0810831990903 0.123202303941 66% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.064894877852 0.077325440228 84% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.485715697793 0.547984918172 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.136403793081 0.149214159877 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0960147394576 0.161403998019 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537126954604 0.0892212321368 60% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.383009644825 0.385218514788 99% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0209547806169 0.0692045440612 30% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172025598294 0.275328986314 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.02160935313 0.0653680567796 33% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.4325221239 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.30420353982 170% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88274336283 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 7.22455752212 42% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 3.66592920354 136% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.70907079646 111% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 13.5995575221 81% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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