The first step to self-knowledge is rejection of the familiar.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your p

Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'if', 'so']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.188405797101 0.240241500013 78% => OK
Verbs: 0.202898550725 0.157235817809 129% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0579710144928 0.0880659088768 66% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0144927536232 0.0497285424764 29% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0869565217391 0.0444667217837 196% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0869565217391 0.12292977631 71% => OK
Participles: 0.0579710144928 0.0406280797675 143% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.32407392451 2.79330140395 119% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0289855072464 0.030933414821 94% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.115942028986 0.0997080785238 116% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0289855072464 0.0249443105267 116% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0579710144928 0.0148568991511 390% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 423.0 2732.02544248 15% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 65.0 452.878318584 14% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.50769230769 6.0361032391 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.83941151443 4.58838876751 62% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.353846153846 0.366273622748 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.338461538462 0.280924506359 120% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.292307692308 0.200843997647 146% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.184615384615 0.132149295362 140% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32407392451 2.79330140395 119% => OK
Unique words: 45.0 219.290929204 21% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.692307692308 0.48968727796 141% => OK
Word variations: 49.4451956475 55.4138127331 89% => OK
How many sentences: 3.0 20.6194690265 15% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 21.6666666667 23.380412469 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.308133997 59.4972553346 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.0 141.124799967 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 23.380412469 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.674092028746 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.94800884956 40% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.21349557522 0% => OK
Readability: 55.5128205128 51.4728631049 108% => OK
Elegance: 1.09523809524 1.64882698954 66% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.871319226594 0.391690518653 222% => The coherence between essay topic and essay body is overfitting.
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.226120958216 0.123202303941 184% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0692633116796 0.077325440228 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.852253471517 0.547984918172 156% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.104709334832 0.149214159877 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.566362534723 0.161403998019 351% => Sentence topic similarity is too high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.207666817996 0.0892212321368 233% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.139284580557 0.385218514788 36% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0 0.0692045440612 0% => Paragraphs are so close to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.6228038343 0.275328986314 226% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112136285737 0.0653680567796 172% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 10.4325221239 10% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88274336283 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 1.0 7.22455752212 14% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 0.0 3.66592920354 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.70907079646 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 1.0 13.5995575221 7% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 41.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.5 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.