Governments should focus on solving the immediate problems of today rather than on trying to solve the anticipated problems of the future.
In any country, there are plentiful problems occurring. The author claim that government urge to work more on solving the problems occurring now rather than trying to solve the future problem that will be happen. I concede with this claim, government need to find out what is the problem of people and then try to solve that problem. I agree with this issue at some extent, trying to solve problem that will occur in future like global warming also very beneficial.
Firstly, It is well known that today is the best time to start any work. Government should undoubtedly focus on current issue. Likewise, give 24hrs electricity to every home in rural areas. Nowadays, in many countries unemployment rate is drastically increase therefore, government should create new policy so many companies/factories attract to set up their manufacturing plant. Consequently, unemployment rate will diminish.
Moreover, government has to be fulfill services in rural areas as they give in urban areas. For instance, In urban areas there are many banks, hospitals, schools, colleges and universities. This type of services are basic needs for every people therefore, government try to provide all necessary needs in rural areas rather than wasting money in researches that will be or will not be help in future.
However, also need to focus on long-term problem like global warming is critical issue for world. If we don’t do anything now the outcomes will be more dangerous in couple of years. At that time problems are too big to fix on short time which leads to fatal disasters. Government need to take some step to prevent this problem.
In sum, the statement at some point is right like create plenty of jobs, give electricity, provide necessary needs . Nevertheless, it overlooks many long-term issues, particularly global warming, who leads major problems in forthcoming years.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 209, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
... home in rural areas. Nowadays, in many countries unemployment rate is drastically increa...
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Line 5, column 391, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...arches that will be or will not be help in future. However, also need to focus on lon...
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Line 9, column 115, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ive electricity, provide necessary needs . Nevertheless, it overlooks many long-te...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, likewise, look, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, well, as to, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 14.8657303371 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1585.0 2235.4752809 71% => OK
No of words: 304.0 442.535393258 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21381578947 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.832339066 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555921052632 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 704.065955056 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.740449438202 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.2338232458 60.3974514979 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0555555556 118.986275619 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8888888889 23.4991977007 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.21951772744 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34470505421 0.243740707755 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100979158685 0.0831039109588 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110725867707 0.0758088955206 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161338003833 0.150359130593 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.134024609595 0.0667264976115 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 14.1392134831 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.8420337079 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 100.480337079 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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