Governments should not fund any scientific research whose consequences are unclear.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Eddison, in order to fathom the problem of how to create a bulb made several attempts. But, did he stopped? No ! His research, his continued efforts, perseverance finally was rewarded with invention of bulb that lights our houses today. Sometimes, a research takes a lot of time to show results. It doesn't means that since, we are unable to get anything at the moment, we will not get anything after this moment also.So, the recommendation that Government should not fund any scientific research whose consequences are unclear doesn't seems to be cogent. Simply prohibiting funding of any scientific research on this basis may avert some new inventions. Also, sometimes results of any research takes some time to come. As such a decision to curtail or stop funding doesn't seems to very prudent decision.
NASA, a famous space research agency every year spent millions of dollars in their research to understand the universe, its planets, galaxies and to find if life really exists or not. Still, today we don't have very clear answers to, do aliens exists? Does universe has only planets that we have discovered or there are many ? In Fact, we have numerous questions to which we don't have any clear answers. However, does this means that the money or fund devoted to the research activities carried out by NASA is futile ? In my opinion, answer is NO. Even tough, consequences are not clear now, even tough we don't have any concrete answers to these questions but still this continued efforts has led us to so many results that what surrounds us, existence of planets and in fact, several other things. Also, in the future, who knows that might these continued efforts can bring answers to all out questions which we don't know yet.
Furthermore, not every research can show results quickly. Sometimes, a research takes a lot of time to show its success. For instance, the research project carried out to launch satellite has several instances when it failed. Sometimes, because of a faulty programming or sometimes because of some of the assumptions that proved wrong. But all these failures are not true indicative of that the research is worthless and not good to continue. Instead, it brings out the fallacies in previous methods and leads to more refined process and solution. This continued effort essentially becomes the key to success. This is shown by the scientist in several situations where they initially failed in launching satellites or their space shuttle or missile. But with their continued struggle they were able to achieve success and today we see these satellite has solved so many problems like getting accurate location, mobile networks and many more.
In a nutshell, simply stopping funding of any project just because its consequences aren't clear is not a very wise decision. Government should understand that some research continues for year and then only show some propitious sign. A research requires continued effort. An invention or a success of any research involves many attempts of which mostly fails. Thus, given a chance to scientific research, it can unravel new mysteries and might give us something that can change the world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 249, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: research
...hat lights our houses today. Sometimes, a research takes a lot of time to show results. It...
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Line 1, column 419, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...will not get anything after this moment also.So, the recommendation that Government ...
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Line 1, column 424, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
...not get anything after this moment also.So, the recommendation that Government sho...
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Line 3, column 272, Rule ID: DOES_NP_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'have'?
Suggestion: have
...ers to, do aliens exists? Does universe has only planets that we have discovered or...
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Line 3, column 272, Rule ID: DOES_X_HAS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'have'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: have
...ers to, do aliens exists? Does universe has only planets that we have discovered or...
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Line 5, column 70, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: research
...ch can show results quickly. Sometimes, a research takes a lot of time to show its success...
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Line 5, column 294, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...lty programming or sometimes because of some of the assumptions that proved wrong. But all ...
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Line 7, column 240, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: Research
...nd then only show some propitious sign. A research requires continued effort. An invention...
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Line 7, column 260, Rule ID: NEEDS_FIXED[1]
Message: "requires continued" is only accepted in certain dialects. For something more widely acceptable, try 'continuing' or 'to be continued'.
Suggestion: continuing; to be continued
...me propitious sign. A research requires continued effort. An invention or a success of an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, however, if, may, really, so, still, then, thus, for instance, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 33.0505617978 151% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2684.0 2235.4752809 120% => OK
No of words: 533.0 442.535393258 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03564727955 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80487177365 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60878273961 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 271.0 215.323595506 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508442776735 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 824.4 704.065955056 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.740449438202 135% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.2370786517 148% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.2217518859 60.3974514979 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.4666666667 118.986275619 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7666666667 23.4991977007 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.93333333333 5.21951772744 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 5.13820224719 253% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154537664804 0.243740707755 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0410431111515 0.0831039109588 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0378732284991 0.0758088955206 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107022973384 0.150359130593 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525019933646 0.0667264976115 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 100.480337079 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
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Rates: 58.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.