Governments should not fund any scientific research whose consequences are unclear.
Technology is the product of scientific innovation. Many inventions have come and gone each providing a solution to the problems of our society. Some have drastically elevated the standard of living and made our lives simpler. Just like without any practice a sportsperson cannot become the master of the sport, without any research a theory cannot be converted to the practical use. Therefore, scientific research is the future of the world and if funded by the government will help us achieve greater heights.
The scientific research leads to innovative technologies which have alleviated human lives. If study in the field of thermodynamics was obscured by the lack of government funding, today we wouldn’t have cars, boats or airplanes. These vehicles have enhanced the transportation system and gave us the luxury of travelling anywhere in the world with less effort. If the idea of space travel was rebuffed, then we would never have visited the moon and learnt about the astonishing characteristics of the space.
On the other hand, however, scientific research has also led to some unfavourable events in the world’s history. The invention of atomic energy as a substitute for conventional energy sources has documented a disastrous impact on some countries. This invention has led to the manufacture of the virulent substances like bombs which are used by some groups to terrorize the world. These kind of inventions would cause anyone to rethink the idea of supporting the scientific research with unprecedented information.
On the contrary, the research could also lead to some never before found exigent solutions to the various deadly diseases. Many diseases like AIDS and cancer are still without complete curable treatments. The government funds play crucial role in creation and testing of new drugs to eradicate the causes responsible for these diseases. Without proper funding the doctors have to rely on the mundane methods and expect for the best results.
Instead of focusing on the bizarre problems and wasting money on the ideas with no possible solutions, the governments should promote something where the future of the society banks on. Science is the solution for many remedies. Also, the funding of various research programs will attract many individuals and greatly enhance the work force of the country. Thus, any unprecedented scientific research plays a role of paramount importance in the improvement of the society and deserves to be funded.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 387, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'These kinds'?
Suggestion: This kind; These kinds
... by some groups to terrorize the world. These kind of inventions would cause anyone to ret...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'still', 'then', 'therefore', 'thus', 'kind of', 'on the contrary', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.275229357798 0.240241500013 115% => OK
Verbs: 0.142201834862 0.157235817809 90% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0894495412844 0.0880659088768 102% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0366972477064 0.0497285424764 74% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0137614678899 0.0444667217837 31% => OK
Prepositions: 0.128440366972 0.12292977631 104% => OK
Participles: 0.0481651376147 0.0406280797675 119% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.93389598078 2.79330140395 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0275229357798 0.030933414821 89% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.151376146789 0.0997080785238 152% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0183486238532 0.0249443105267 74% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00688073394495 0.0148568991511 46% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2495.0 2732.02544248 91% => OK
No of words: 394.0 452.878318584 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.33248730964 6.0361032391 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.58838876751 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.406091370558 0.366273622748 111% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.327411167513 0.280924506359 117% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.243654822335 0.200843997647 121% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.154822335025 0.132149295362 117% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93389598078 2.79330140395 105% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 219.290929204 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553299492386 0.48968727796 113% => OK
Word variations: 63.2882299448 55.4138127331 114% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6194690265 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.7619047619 23.380412469 80% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.6021136361 59.4972553346 56% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.80952381 141.124799967 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7619047619 23.380412469 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.52380952381 0.674092028746 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.21349557522 19% => OK
Readability: 51.5030215132 51.4728631049 100% => OK
Elegance: 2.34523809524 1.64882698954 142% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0637943052667 0.391690518653 16% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0953755734523 0.123202303941 77% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0421275327976 0.077325440228 54% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.595247920664 0.547984918172 109% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.127387871377 0.149214159877 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0343222066064 0.161403998019 21% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349652528303 0.0892212321368 39% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.482264637532 0.385218514788 125% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0477748822132 0.0692045440612 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0496347444234 0.275328986314 18% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0214578725742 0.0653680567796 33% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.4325221239 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.30420353982 113% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88274336283 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 7.22455752212 138% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 3.66592920354 136% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.5995575221 118% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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