Governments should offer a free university education to any student who has been admitted to a university but who cannot afford the tuition.Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take

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Governments should offer a free university education to any student who has been admitted to a university but who cannot afford the tuition.
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.

Education is fundamental for the development of any individual. Due to financial reasons many students don't get admission in good universities and even no university education at all. Even talented students have to stop trying for good colleges as they cannot afford the tuitions. Due to financial reasons many individuals have to give up their dreams. Not only those students remain eluded to pursue their dreams, society also loses a lot of talent due to this.
It's government's job to provide the means for development to all citizens equally. Government should ensure that no student misses higher education due to financial reasons.
Providing free education to a lot of students may incur a big cost financially. This may be not viable for many countries. As there may be lack of funds. Even in this scenario good education to all deserving students will produce a lot of good professionals, doctors, engineers etc., which will surely contribute to the economy of that nation. Providing financials means to students will be a good investment anyway.
Governments should offer free university education to any student who has been admitted to a university and cannot afford tuition as this is good for the individual development as well as for the nation's development.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 104, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... Due to financial reasons many students dont get admission in good universities and ...
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Line 1, column 385, Rule ID: ELUDED_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'alluded to'?
Suggestion: alluded to
... dreams. Not only those students remain eluded to pursue their dreams, society also loses...
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Line 3, column 123, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s may be not viable for many countries. As there may be lack of funds. Even in thi...
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Line 4, column 197, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...dividual development as well as for the nations development.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'anyway', 'but', 'may', 'so', 'well', 'as for', 'as well as']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.256637168142 0.240241500013 107% => OK
Verbs: 0.146017699115 0.157235817809 93% => OK
Adjectives: 0.101769911504 0.0880659088768 116% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0663716814159 0.0497285424764 133% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0176991150442 0.0444667217837 40% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0884955752212 0.12292977631 72% => OK
Participles: 0.0265486725664 0.0406280797675 65% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.93587880365 2.79330140395 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0663716814159 0.030933414821 215% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00442477876106 0.0016655270985 266% => OK
Determiners: 0.110619469027 0.0997080785238 111% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0442477876106 0.0249443105267 177% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00884955752212 0.0148568991511 60% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1274.0 2732.02544248 47% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 207.0 452.878318584 46% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.15458937198 6.0361032391 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 4.58838876751 83% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.391304347826 0.366273622748 107% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.309178743961 0.280924506359 110% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.24154589372 0.200843997647 120% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.173913043478 0.132149295362 132% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93587880365 2.79330140395 105% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 219.290929204 51% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541062801932 0.48968727796 110% => OK
Word variations: 48.9171212012 55.4138127331 88% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6194690265 63% => OK
Sentence length: 15.9230769231 23.380412469 68% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3911787609 59.4972553346 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 141.124799967 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9230769231 23.380412469 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.615384615385 0.674092028746 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.21349557522 77% => OK
Readability: 46.8409513192 51.4728631049 91% => OK
Elegance: 1.61538461538 1.64882698954 98% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319738804794 0.391690518653 82% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.113424481695 0.123202303941 92% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0749979859819 0.077325440228 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.546594090092 0.547984918172 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.180420824106 0.149214159877 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122566129267 0.161403998019 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105788592053 0.0892212321368 119% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.235640120346 0.385218514788 61% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0776363241669 0.0692045440612 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24122075542 0.275328986314 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120010084014 0.0653680567796 184% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.4325221239 77% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88274336283 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 7.22455752212 111% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 13.5995575221 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 41.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.5 Out of 6
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