Governments should offer a free university education to any student who has been admitted to a university but who cannot afford the tuition.Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take

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Governments should offer a free university education to any student who has been admitted to a university but who cannot afford the tuition.

Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.

The policy put forward by the author is interesting and resonates with my own thought process. Education is a fundamental right of every individual, often there are situation where an academically talented individual has to give up his education because of rising tution fees of university graduate and undergraduate programs. In my view the policy of free education to everyone, if implemented will proof beneficial no only to a student who cannot afford tutuion fees but also to the growth of economy of the country.
Education and Research are important back bone of the any countries economy, but often there has been a decilne in the number of students taking up graduate studies like PhD because of lack of funding and high tution fees. For example, A student pursuing a Master of Science program in university, after completing his graduate program often plans to do a job rather than pursuing PhD even if he has the interest and aptitude to carryout world class research, the reason behind this is obvious, the student has already taken a loan to pursue his Master's program to cope up with his tution fees and now he has to repay the same. Obviously he cannot take another loan before repaying the previous. Even if the there is a possibility of funding and scholarship for carrying out his research, it is often limited and competitive.
Onemore side of the policy is, if the university provides the education for free to everyone, how the university is going to cope up with their own expenses?. The university has lot of expenses to take care of like operating costs, maintainence costs etc. One problem which may arise due to no tution fees scheme is that universities will be short of funds. No University can survive on solely government funding.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, as to, for example, in my view

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 33.0505617978 42% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 2235.4752809 66% => OK
No of words: 300.0 442.535393258 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88333333333 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76610235209 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 215.323595506 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553333333333 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 704.065955056 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.740449438202 135% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 96.6265709568 60.3974514979 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.181818182 118.986275619 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2727272727 23.4991977007 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 5.21951772744 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212558356837 0.243740707755 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0821144560343 0.0831039109588 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499990813511 0.0758088955206 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145675880089 0.150359130593 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466761161696 0.0667264976115 70% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 14.1392134831 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 100.480337079 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 11.8971910112 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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