Governments should place few, if any, restrictions on scientific research and development.
Twenty first century is the place of research and development in every field. We are largely dependent on the development of the tools and devices which we use on a regular basis. If there would be no scientific research there would be no mobile phones, computers, aero planes and many more without which we cannot assume our life in the current scenario. Scientific research has helped us a lot in many ways.
On the first facet, we can analyze that how we are surrounded by the development of the science. One cannot imagine a world without mobile phone which help us interact with the friends and relatives sitting in any part of the world, without internet which help us to follow latest trends going on in the world, help us connect people in mere click of buttons, let us send emails, everything which we need is now available on internet. Research and development in the field of medicine has increased out life expectancy, it has lead us to live a stronger and better life. Diseases which we were not able to cure in nineteenth or twentieth century are now curable. Many devices has been developed which help us cure us while sitting at our home. Development in the field of transport has decreased our time to travel from one place to another and also in luxurious way. Aero planes have decreased the time to travel with a huge ratio. In order to substantiate we can examine the time taken to travel from Kashmir to Kanyakumari, earlier it took around three to four days to travel but with the introduction of planes it has reduced to around 3 to 4 hours. Therefore, scientific research in such fields has helped us a lot.
However, this is not always the case. If we go deep down the statement, scientific development in field like nuclear research has led to vast amount of destruction. To make it apparent, I would like to cite an example of Hiroshima and Nagasaki which were totally destroyed in the Second World War with the help of the atom bomb. Research and development in the field of battle has also increased leading to intense environment. Also development in the field of medicine is also destroying us as many drugs has been developed which slowly and slowly lead us to death or make us reliable on them resulting in boom in the market of drugs.
In crux, I concede that ban should not be imposed on the improvements which help us to live a better life and government should properly scrutinize the fields and labs in which development is going on properly impose ban on research which will harm the society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Twenty-first
Twenty first century is the place of research and de...
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Message: You should probably use 'have', 'haven'.
Suggestion: have; haven
...h century are now curable. Many devices has been developed which help us cure us wh...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...creased leading to intense environment. Also development in the field of medicine is...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'therefore', 'while']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.224742268041 0.240241500013 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.173195876289 0.157235817809 110% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0721649484536 0.0880659088768 82% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0474226804124 0.0497285424764 95% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0659793814433 0.0444667217837 148% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.127835051546 0.12292977631 104% => OK
Participles: 0.0494845360825 0.0406280797675 122% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.61449803978 2.79330140395 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.039175257732 0.030933414821 127% => OK
Particles: 0.00412371134021 0.0016655270985 248% => OK
Determiners: 0.0824742268041 0.0997080785238 83% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.020618556701 0.0249443105267 83% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0268041237113 0.0148568991511 180% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2539.0 2732.02544248 93% => OK
No of words: 450.0 452.878318584 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.64222222222 6.0361032391 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6057793516 4.58838876751 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.317777777778 0.366273622748 87% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.222222222222 0.280924506359 79% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.155555555556 0.200843997647 77% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.104444444444 0.132149295362 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61449803978 2.79330140395 94% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 219.290929204 94% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.457777777778 0.48968727796 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 50.7592606235 55.4138127331 92% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6194690265 92% => OK
Sentence length: 23.6842105263 23.380412469 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.2817346885 59.4972553346 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.631578947 141.124799967 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6842105263 23.380412469 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.473684210526 0.674092028746 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.21349557522 58% => OK
Readability: 45.9064327485 51.4728631049 89% => OK
Elegance: 1.40287769784 1.64882698954 85% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168096243321 0.391690518653 43% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.112999626068 0.123202303941 92% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0838106546059 0.077325440228 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.510232788978 0.547984918172 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.187974857563 0.149214159877 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0804320621801 0.161403998019 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624406223604 0.0892212321368 70% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.455861408903 0.385218514788 118% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.123004335297 0.0692045440612 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15486605469 0.275328986314 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564508472922 0.0653680567796 86% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.4325221239 38% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.30420353982 113% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88274336283 184% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 4.0 7.22455752212 55% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 3.66592920354 164% => OK
Neutral topic words: 7.0 2.70907079646 258% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.5995575221 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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