The greatness of individuals can be decided only by those who live after them, not by their contemporaries.
The author in the issue talks about the greatness of the person. I would like to state that I am in a complete disagreement with what author says. There are multiple reasons for disagreement with author’s view. I will try to enable my views in the succeeding paragraphs.
Primarily, I see many loopholes with what the author suggests. He says that any person’s greatness can be decided by those who live after them and not by who live with them or not by their contemporaries & I completely not agreed with it. Moreover there are various other reasons which prompt my disagreement with author. Author says that greatness of the person can be decided by after his death, in some situation may be it is correct but we can’t say that it is perfectly true for all the situation. As, my point of view in some situation the effect of man‘s actions may be seen by years after his death. Charles Darwin, the great biologist-scientist gives theory of evolution but people at his time can’t accept his theories but after his death he is famous for his theories. Now he is consider as a great scientist. We can also take the example of Galileo, Kepler all stood by the theory that earth is not at the center of the universe but their theory can not accepted by their contemporaries. Today we all know that earth is not the center of the universe.
In contrary, if we consider any artists or writer their work is appreciated by their contemporaries. Writer like Shakespeare was appreciated by their contemporaries and their good work is also appreciated by those who live after them. So their greatness can be appreciated by both who live after them and who lives with them. Painter and musicians are also appreciated by their contemporaries. Even today, Shakespeare and all that artists are accepted as a great people due to their work centuries ago.
To wrap up my discussion over this issue, I once again exemplify as I have done in the previous paragraphs. After all, life has many options, we take some and abandon some. So after more study about this issue it is clearly conclude that it is not necessary that the greatness of the individuals can also be decided by those who live after them, not by their contemporaries.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: whom
...by those who live after them and not by who live with them or not by their contempo...
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Suggestion: Moreover,
...ries & I completely not agreed with it. Moreover there are various other reasons which p...
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Suggestion: maybe
...d by after his death, in some situation may be it is correct but we can't say tha...
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Suggestion: considered
...e is famous for his theories. Now he is consider as a great scientist. We can also take ...
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...f the universe but their theory can not accepted by their contemporaries. Today we all k...
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Suggestion: concluded
...re study about this issue it is clearly conclude that it is not necessary that the great...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'after all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.209459459459 0.240241500013 87% => OK
Verbs: 0.148648648649 0.157235817809 95% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0472972972973 0.0880659088768 54% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0495495495495 0.0497285424764 100% => OK
Pronouns: 0.108108108108 0.0444667217837 243% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.155405405405 0.12292977631 126% => OK
Participles: 0.0315315315315 0.0406280797675 78% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.92109102956 2.79330140395 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.00900900900901 0.030933414821 29% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00225225225225 0.0016655270985 135% => OK
Determiners: 0.0855855855856 0.0997080785238 86% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.027027027027 0.0249443105267 108% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0202702702703 0.0148568991511 136% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2253.0 2732.02544248 82% => OK
No of words: 392.0 452.878318584 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.74744897959 6.0361032391 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.58838876751 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.267857142857 0.366273622748 73% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.204081632653 0.280924506359 73% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.158163265306 0.200843997647 79% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.125 0.132149295362 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92109102956 2.79330140395 105% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 219.290929204 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.441326530612 0.48968727796 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 46.5125546212 55.4138127331 84% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6194690265 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.6666666667 23.380412469 80% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4174682456 59.4972553346 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.285714286 141.124799967 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 23.380412469 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.333333333333 0.674092028746 49% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.21349557522 115% => OK
Readability: 39.074829932 51.4728631049 76% => OK
Elegance: 1.29411764706 1.64882698954 78% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.532454881582 0.391690518653 136% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.164094082207 0.123202303941 133% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.161544350424 0.077325440228 209% => Ideas in sentences are similar.
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.482021431694 0.547984918172 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.166219289718 0.149214159877 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.172562931923 0.161403998019 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.181218990175 0.0892212321368 203% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.290558614508 0.385218514788 75% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.030196179019 0.0692045440612 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.340859834027 0.275328986314 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.142810694496 0.0653680567796 218% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.4325221239 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.30420353982 132% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88274336283 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 7.22455752212 111% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 3.66592920354 136% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.70907079646 148% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.5995575221 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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