The human mind will always be superior to machines because machines are only tools of human minds.

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The human mind will always be superior to machines because machines are only tools of human minds.

As we know that Science and technology has done a lot for human beings. Science has dramatically changed the life of common man. Thousands of invention makes the life so simple. We can say that it all because of Science and technology, but behind these inventions there is a human mind and human capability to think. Its actually a human mind who invent devices like computer, television, internet.

By the passage of time these inventions are getting smarter and intelligent. If take a example of Television Now a days It can control it brightness itself whether someone watching Television in darkness or in a day light. Now we have cars with a system of auto parking. If look further we have Planes with auto pilot options, which actually fly the plane without any pilot in cockpit. So we have enormous example where devices are doing their work independently, even in car manufacturing industries, where robots are working instead of human being.

In these days it become a huge debate whether a human mind or a human made machines who is more intelligent. There is a scientific research on mind that we human have not use out mind to it full capacity, we normally use 3 to 4 percent of our brain in our daily, even the most famous scientist Einstein use his 11 percent of his mind total capacity. Now lets think if we can use our brain 100 percent, human being can do almost anything what we can imagine.

However Human mind still far ahead to the machines that he had made. Those machines still need instructions through programming and commands to do thing. Well no one compete the GOD nature, If we compare the mind of an Ant mind with devices that human created, Still those machines are way behind than mind of an Ant.

To Sum up the above overall discussion, we could say human mind will always be superior than the human made machines because its on-going process, Human being are learning new things day by day and applying those learning to make new devices and machine, Its impossible to say in the future also that those machine will superior than the human mind.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, look, so, still, well, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalization wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1728.0 2235.4752809 77% => OK
No of words: 368.0 442.535393258 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69565217391 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5434550352 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 215.323595506 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529891304348 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.740449438202 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.3846881739 60.3974514979 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.647058824 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6470588235 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88235294118 5.21951772744 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364754253653 0.243740707755 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110621978906 0.0831039109588 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120394957021 0.0758088955206 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218652382172 0.150359130593 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131550832638 0.0667264976115 197% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 12.1639044944 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 100.480337079 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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