imagination vs. Knowledge (Position with Counterarguments)
In most professions and academic fields, imagination is more important than knowledge.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
It is believed that being creative is more important than being knowledgeable. Although we can let our imagination go wild, while making virtual things into visual, knowledge becomes critical during development. Without knowledge, the imagination will difficult to be realized and still belong to imagination.
It is true that human always dreams of something impossible. After observing the aerodynamics of birds and their ability to fly, Wright brothers invented the first human-manipulated flying machine. It sounds piece of cake, however, it involves a great amount of knowledge of aerodynamics and mathematics. Needless to say, the two brothers failed many times at the beginning because of the insufficient understanding of the flying mechanism. Therefore, without sufficient knowledge, it is impossible for them to exhibit such an innovation.
Similarly, art has the inherence of being creative. Many modern works are abstract and complicated. They seems nonsense and confusing to ordinary people, however, from the artist’s point of view, each lines or curves in the paintings are related to different style of aesthetics. In order to perform a magnificent artistic works, those principles have to be followed and be admired by other artists. Thus, despite the fact that most of the sculptures or paintings are created via imagination, they cannot convert into marvelous works of art if there is no knowledge of how to embellish and polish them.
To sum up, without the help of academic knowledge, dreams will be difficult to become true.
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Essay evaluation report
Sentence: Without knowledge, the imagination will difficult to be realized and still belong to imagination.
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to will and difficult
Sentence: They seems nonsense and confusing to ordinary people, however, from the artist's point of view, each lines or curves in the paintings are related to different style of aesthetics.
Description: A pronoun, personal, nominative, not 3rd person singular is not usually followed by a verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
Suggestion: Refer to They and seems
Description: A determiner/pronoun, singular is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to each and lines
Sentence: Similarly, art has the inherence of being creative.
Error: inherence Suggestion: No alternate word
flaws:
No. of Words: 241 350
Minimum 250 words wanted
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 2.5 out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 241 350
No. of Characters: 1271 1500
No. of Different Words: 157 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.94 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.274 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.981 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 99 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 79 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 61 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 43 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.214 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.437 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.714 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.302 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.528 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.07 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 106, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'They' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'seem'
Suggestion: seem
...orks are abstract and complicated. They seems nonsense and confusing to ordinary peop...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 329, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'work'?
Suggestion: work
...order to perform a magnificent artistic works, those principles have to be followed a...
^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'however', 'if', 'similarly', 'so', 'still', 'therefore', 'thus', 'while', 'it is true', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.197841726619 0.240241500013 82% => OK
Verbs: 0.169064748201 0.157235817809 108% => OK
Adjectives: 0.125899280576 0.0880659088768 143% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0359712230216 0.0497285424764 72% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0431654676259 0.0444667217837 97% => OK
Prepositions: 0.13309352518 0.12292977631 108% => OK
Participles: 0.0539568345324 0.0406280797675 133% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.12729865873 2.79330140395 112% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0431654676259 0.030933414821 140% => OK
Particles: 0.00359712230216 0.0016655270985 216% => OK
Determiners: 0.068345323741 0.0997080785238 69% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0143884892086 0.0249443105267 58% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00359712230216 0.0148568991511 24% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1559.0 2732.02544248 57% => OK
No of words: 241.0 452.878318584 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.46887966805 6.0361032391 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.58838876751 86% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.414937759336 0.366273622748 113% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.336099585062 0.280924506359 120% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.269709543568 0.200843997647 134% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.186721991701 0.132149295362 141% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12729865873 2.79330140395 112% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 219.290929204 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.659751037344 0.48968727796 135% => OK
Word variations: 75.042544188 55.4138127331 135% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6194690265 68% => OK
Sentence length: 17.2142857143 23.380412469 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2576523995 59.4972553346 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.357142857 141.124799967 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2142857143 23.380412469 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.785714285714 0.674092028746 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.21349557522 38% => OK
Readability: 50.8242442205 51.4728631049 99% => OK
Elegance: 1.55072463768 1.64882698954 94% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251997462479 0.391690518653 64% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0624303537888 0.123202303941 51% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0493431498617 0.077325440228 64% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.520264225055 0.547984918172 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.182335334156 0.149214159877 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0974608936859 0.161403998019 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543742195819 0.0892212321368 61% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.262157027855 0.385218514788 68% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0837348905514 0.0692045440612 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170348433995 0.275328986314 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397140110882 0.0653680567796 61% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.4325221239 77% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.30420353982 94% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88274336283 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 2.0 7.22455752212 28% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.66592920354 109% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.70907079646 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 6.0 13.5995575221 44% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 41.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.5 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.