“The increasingly rapid pace of life today causes more problems than it solves.”
One of my friends made a statement that “The most people of in the USA are among the most happiest people on this planet”. Ever wounded why? They people don’t have any problem or stress in their life? Or they are still believed to live life as per old norms? I agree with author statement that, the increasingly rapid pace of life today causes more problems than it solves.
The present world is so rapid if you not coup up with that, you will be throughout or else, you will be ignored. Computation is part of this rapid life. For an example, if Whatsapp founder Koum and Acton will think that now their application is so famous worldwide around 1 Billion peoples are using this application, so they do not need to think or work on more their application for future. Koum and Acton will never think like this. There is a lot of other same application available in this market and for computing to this world they always think big, Koum and Acton always work on their application and upgrade their system to presenting something new for competing with their competitors.
Computation is requiring necessary in our life because without computation we never reach to our aim. Yes, this computation will create problems or mental stress, but it depends on a person how to manage those problems in their own life. There is no time to people to relieve their stress from busy life. Let compare USA lifestyle with India lifestyle. The USA is the world largest technologies sector. After a lot of technologies also people face a lot of problem and stress but they know how to manage problems and stress in their life and find out peace. People lived in the USA they always work with schedule. People working harder in weekdays as per targeted importance works and completed before the weekend. They always spend a weekend with family, friend and social or sports activities for relieving their stress or for peace. Because of this lifestyle they always happily ready to compete with the rapid world. I sad to say that, in India people never follow the schedule and because of that they only working harder and harder, not getting time for them self for enjoying, relieve stress and find peace.
In conclusion, for computing this rapid world will face a lot of problems and stress but we try to manage our lifestyle in our own way and don’t lose “PACE” and “HAPPINESS” just for the sake of evolving in rapidly.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 91, Rule ID: MOST_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'happiest' (without 'most') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: happiest
...most people of in the USA are among the most happiest people on this planet'. Ever wound...
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Line 1, column 91, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'most the happiest'.
Suggestion: most the happiest
...most people of in the USA are among the most happiest people on this planet'. Ever wound...
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Line 5, column 383, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'technologies'' or 'technology's'?
Suggestion: technologies'; technology's
...lifestyle. The USA is the world largest technologies sector. After a lot of technologies als...
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Line 5, column 449, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun problem seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of problems'.
Suggestion: a lot of problems
... a lot of technologies also people face a lot of problem and stress but they know how to manage ...
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Line 5, column 837, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...or relieving their stress or for peace. Because of this lifestyle they always happily r...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'so', 'still', 'in conclusion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.245283018868 0.238963963785 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.146750524109 0.154291517835 95% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0545073375262 0.0886310499679 61% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0566037735849 0.0506014161523 112% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0733752620545 0.0449626384858 163% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.140461215933 0.123526278965 114% => OK
Participles: 0.0335429769392 0.0379742944744 88% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.6150247411 2.82910677849 92% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0251572327044 0.0316879551592 79% => OK
Particles: 0.0041928721174 0.0014075125626 298% => Less particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0712788259958 0.0950106342287 75% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0125786163522 0.0245489744465 51% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0062893081761 0.0157978311181 40% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2442.0 2899.98275862 84% => OK
No of words: 424.0 478.390804598 89% => OK
Chars per words: 5.75943396226 6.0591788892 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.65681771538 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.311320754717 0.369966551584 84% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.207547169811 0.285172536893 73% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.132075471698 0.207245337619 64% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0943396226415 0.136322040163 69% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6150247411 2.82910677849 92% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 234.298850575 84% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.464622641509 0.492565540709 94% => OK
Word variations: 50.7114510026 56.8184620615 89% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 21.1264367816 104% => OK
Sentence length: 19.2727272727 23.7468607788 81% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.0244243934 62.0618507366 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 143.81877709 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2727272727 23.7468607788 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.272727272727 0.728815259664 37% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.87931034483 82% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.71264367816 65% => OK
Readability: 40.0274442539 52.2641144681 77% => OK
Elegance: 1.51515151515 1.64547068916 92% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230002997512 0.39480681544 58% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.104466657171 0.11556216369 90% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0749462632678 0.0736162880345 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.4316141986 0.531340600358 81% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.198273185065 0.15197228837 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0913856301439 0.158818324754 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.15327874172 0.0851127212816 180% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.289900503215 0.388921930462 75% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0868353378825 0.0677916285025 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179065345177 0.28015025965 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.134907694034 0.0610219844235 221% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.8591954023 55% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.30459770115 151% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.96264367816 161% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 8.10632183908 49% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 3.93390804598 153% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 3.04597701149 131% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 15.0862068966 93% => OK
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 3.75 Out of 6