It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are generated and preserved.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The author claims, The cultural traditions are generated and preserved mostly in cities than in rural regions. It is too broad to consider that only cities are responsible for cultural generation and preservation. The rural regions will have the retro cultural tradition which is followed even now in some regions whereas cities are adapting the new trends in the society. Therefore both the cities and the villages are responsible for cultural generation and preservation.
First, The cities will have a fast growing economy than villages due to the industrial, Technological evolution. Since, most of the people in the cities are dogmatic and only focused on their workplace and their belongings, they do not care about the traditional in the society. Some of the experts consider that education also plays a vital role in the traditions.
The unawareness of the people in cities may results in cultural degradation. Because they are not actually experience the real heritage of a culture, All they do is browse them on internet and have a blind knowledge about the traditions. For example, In India, especially in Tamil Nadu, a state, The people in the rural areas have a tradition of organizing a brave sport called "Jallikattu". It is similar to the bull run in Spain. But many people in the cities are against it, because they think they are hurting the bull. They are filling the cases to ban these kind of sports without any personal experience or any investigation. Thus the people the cities does not the real value of the cultural traditions.
When we are considering the 20th century, the cities are adaption to the newer culture. They are following the other countries traditions. This becomes a fashion now-a-days. May be in future years, cities may be the reason for the generation of the newer cultural traditions.
In conclusion, nation's cultural traditions are generated and preserved in both the cities and rural areas. And it depends on the views of a person about the cities and villages.
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'first', 'may', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'whereas', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'kind of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.247282608696 0.240241500013 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.138586956522 0.157235817809 88% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0951086956522 0.0880659088768 108% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0353260869565 0.0497285424764 71% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0407608695652 0.0444667217837 92% => OK
Prepositions: 0.125 0.12292977631 102% => OK
Participles: 0.0326086956522 0.0406280797675 80% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.80290695977 2.79330140395 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0135869565217 0.030933414821 44% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.160326086957 0.0997080785238 161% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0108695652174 0.0249443105267 44% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0054347826087 0.0148568991511 37% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2017.0 2732.02544248 74% => OK
No of words: 334.0 452.878318584 74% => More words wanted.
Chars per words: 6.03892215569 6.0361032391 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.58838876751 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.37125748503 0.366273622748 101% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.269461077844 0.280924506359 96% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.209580838323 0.200843997647 104% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.12874251497 0.132149295362 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80290695977 2.79330140395 100% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 219.290929204 71% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.467065868263 0.48968727796 95% => OK
Word variations: 47.2043381026 55.4138127331 85% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6194690265 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.7 23.380412469 71% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7397604783 59.4972553346 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.85 141.124799967 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7 23.380412469 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6 0.674092028746 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.21349557522 96% => OK
Readability: 43.6461077844 51.4728631049 85% => OK
Elegance: 1.88607594937 1.64882698954 114% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.480946354577 0.391690518653 123% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.108047973516 0.123202303941 88% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0574526316719 0.077325440228 74% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.600685270538 0.547984918172 110% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.147843172284 0.149214159877 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.227270605153 0.161403998019 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0932079481432 0.0892212321368 104% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.496542939274 0.385218514788 129% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.105223038883 0.0692045440612 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.370386789994 0.275328986314 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0581254801772 0.0653680567796 89% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.4325221239 48% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.30420353982 113% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88274336283 184% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 7.22455752212 69% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 3.66592920354 164% => OK
Neutral topic words: 7.0 2.70907079646 258% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.5995575221 132% => OK
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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