Laws should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances, times, and places.
When it comes to the issue that should be the law more flexible? Some people think that advantages of laws, which are changed according to the conditions, are more than that of fixed laws. However, others maintain the opposite view. As far as I am concerned, each side has strengths and weaknesses. Before giving my opinion about this topic, let us to several point of views, either can confirm it or violate it.
First at all, let us to take a look why some people dislike of this idea of variable rules. They believe people usually obey better of strict laws, while flexible laws can increase anarchy in the society. For example, for many decades in Singapore, the government has banned the consumption chewing gums. Although this law never changed during time, people still agree with it, because this rule improves the cities’ environment.
Although, I admit that it is necessary existing some law in the society be fixed, I believe that good points of flexible rules are apparent. First and the most profit is that sometimes a government has to impose a law that it is logical for a period of time. I think that small instance can give some light to this matter. About fifty years ago in the Austria, decreasing the number of deer in this country coerced the government to impose law that no one is allowed to have this animal. After ten years, the government faced with a new predicament, because increasing the number of dears affects the nature negatively. In this way, the government legislate a flexible law that people could prey dear in some month of a year, while in other months, preying is banned.
A further point we must consider is that it quite normal a country contains many regions that they have various characteristics. Indeed, different laws for each of these places can help local government to use better their facilities. For example, imagine you want to establish an industrial factory in my country. If you build it in the undeveloped cities, you will be exempt from paying tax for ten years, while this law is different in the metropolises. So, the main of this rule is that to encourage investors to invest in the poor cities and boosts the local economics.
In sum, the issue of the fixed law or flexible law is complex one, requiring subjective judgments about the country’s condition or effects of these on people life. Thus, there are no easy or certain answers. Nonetheless, I think that we are living in fast changing environment, So that flexible laws are more functional.
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'nonetheless', 'so', 'still', 'thus', 'while', 'as to', 'for example', 'i think']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.222222222222 0.240241500013 92% => OK
Verbs: 0.157575757576 0.157235817809 100% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0949494949495 0.0880659088768 108% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0323232323232 0.0497285424764 65% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0505050505051 0.0444667217837 114% => OK
Prepositions: 0.139393939394 0.12292977631 113% => OK
Participles: 0.0323232323232 0.0406280797675 80% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.64493323531 2.79330140395 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0242424242424 0.030933414821 78% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.119191919192 0.0997080785238 120% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0161616161616 0.0249443105267 65% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00808080808081 0.0148568991511 54% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2540.0 2732.02544248 93% => OK
No of words: 435.0 452.878318584 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.83908045977 6.0361032391 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.58838876751 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.328735632184 0.366273622748 90% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.241379310345 0.280924506359 86% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.15632183908 0.200843997647 78% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.103448275862 0.132149295362 78% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64493323531 2.79330140395 95% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 219.290929204 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540229885057 0.48968727796 110% => OK
Word variations: 62.9306621714 55.4138127331 114% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6194690265 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.9130434783 23.380412469 81% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7058936612 59.4972553346 58% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.434782609 141.124799967 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9130434783 23.380412469 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.521739130435 0.674092028746 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.21349557522 115% => OK
Readability: 43.0509745127 51.4728631049 84% => OK
Elegance: 1.63865546218 1.64882698954 99% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176064808782 0.391690518653 45% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0967968316093 0.123202303941 79% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0661154682182 0.077325440228 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.468431147374 0.547984918172 85% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.1260379083 0.149214159877 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0666520635252 0.161403998019 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511355520069 0.0892212321368 57% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.355560760974 0.385218514788 92% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.100069404812 0.0692045440612 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124223763449 0.275328986314 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346054038357 0.0653680567796 53% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.4325221239 163% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30420353982 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88274336283 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 13.0 7.22455752212 180% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.5995575221 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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