Most people are taught that loyalty is a virtue. But loyalty-whether to one's friends, to one's school or place of employment, or to any institution-is all too often a destructive rather than a positive force.
In the present day world the foundation of all relationships is loyalty and without this virtue this world would not be as good a place to live as it is now. It is very difficult to imagine a world where loyalty does not exist. Virtues are first few things that get imbibed in us in our childhood and these lay the basis of becoming a good human being. The virtues in a human make him a good human being. If we are not loyal to people around us how can we ever be loyal to our own self? I feel that the virtue of loyalty is of utmost importance in proving our worth as good human beings. I also feel that without this virtue of loyalty in us we can not do justice to whatever we do, be it friendship or service to any institution.
We make friends in day to day life so that life is easy to live. The loyalty from both the friends is very important to keep the friendship going. If one friend is disloyal then that friend is making the institution of friendship stained. If trust or loyalty is broken then the friendship also does not stay. Loyalty works as a bond between two friends. If the element of loyalty is missing from friendship then it would not be possible in friends to share their doubts, worries, happiness and sorrows. I truly believe loyalty can never be destructive; rather it makes a person progressive.
A place of work is a place of worship for an employee as that employee is earning his bread and butter from it. The only thing that an employer expects from his employee is good work and loyalty. A loyal employee is one of the biggest assets of any institution. If an employee is disloyal to his workplace he is doing justice neither to himself nor to his workplace. A disloyal employee is a hindrance for any organization's development. Therefore, loyalty is one virtue which is very important in all the relationships and even in the place of work.
Although loyalty is of utmost importance in a relationship like in friendship or at workplace but if it is blindly followed it can be destructive also. It can also hinder the personal development of a person. If a person working in an organization is offered a better job option from another organization but out of loyalty for his present employer he does not accept then it would be detrimental for his career development. Similarly, in friendship if one friend is doing something wrong and the other friend does not go against his friend out of loyalty then such sort of loyalty is dangerous.
The virtue of loyalty should be practiced so that the person following it should not follow it blindly. Being loyal to ones place of work or to a friend is quite credible but it certainly should not forgo other things which are also important for a person.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...important to keep the friendship going. If one friend is disloyal then that friend...
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Suggestion: as well
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'similarly', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'i feel', 'sort of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.228893058161 0.240241500013 95% => OK
Verbs: 0.155722326454 0.157235817809 99% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0769230769231 0.0880659088768 87% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0694183864916 0.0497285424764 140% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0731707317073 0.0444667217837 165% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.133208255159 0.12292977631 108% => OK
Participles: 0.0356472795497 0.0406280797675 88% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.66213136902 2.79330140395 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0281425891182 0.030933414821 91% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0994371482176 0.0997080785238 100% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0206378986867 0.0249443105267 83% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0093808630394 0.0148568991511 63% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2750.0 2732.02544248 101% => OK
No of words: 499.0 452.878318584 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51102204409 6.0361032391 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72634191566 4.58838876751 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.310621242485 0.366273622748 85% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.23246492986 0.280924506359 83% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.134268537074 0.200843997647 67% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0861723446894 0.132149295362 65% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66213136902 2.79330140395 95% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 219.290929204 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.390781563126 0.48968727796 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 44.1106844605 55.4138127331 80% => OK
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6194690265 126% => OK
Sentence length: 19.1923076923 23.380412469 82% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5983364768 59.4972553346 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.769230769 141.124799967 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1923076923 23.380412469 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.384615384615 0.674092028746 57% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.21349557522 58% => OK
Readability: 42.4388006783 51.4728631049 82% => OK
Elegance: 1.33333333333 1.64882698954 81% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359723608319 0.391690518653 92% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.138524368841 0.123202303941 112% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0988320356731 0.077325440228 128% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.510339718077 0.547984918172 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.135885923905 0.149214159877 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134994070403 0.161403998019 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578299796183 0.0892212321368 65% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.379348646915 0.385218514788 98% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0388729898178 0.0692045440612 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242080415235 0.275328986314 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494310998985 0.0653680567796 76% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 10.4325221239 201% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30420353982 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88274336283 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 16.0 7.22455752212 221% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 20.0 13.5995575221 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.