A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Write a reponse in which you agree or disagree with the reccomendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be adventagous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Some countries may think that diverse education is the best, while others see benefit in a unified curriculum of studies. Forcing same national curriculum on all students is bad because differnent sections of population may require a different program.
First, in some countrys there is a very hetrogeneous population, in such countrys students from different groups may have different ideas about what is important for their education. For example, in my country there are people that have a different religion. It will be a very awkward to force anyone to study a faith which they are not part of. Also, some groups of people carry a very different history. So these people can gain more knowledge from studying their own history. While it is true that studying the history of populations outside one's direct group may help to develop a more liberal perspective.
Let's look at another case in any system of education. The case of the highly gifted student and the students that have difficulties. For them a nationalized "normalized" study curriculum either won't be enough of a challange, or will dim to be to difficult for them to complete in the case of the students that have problems. For students that fall outside of the normal or average system it can be a dearth to stick to a given program.
Adversly, it is true that some of the program should be standarsized, like for example Math. A basic level in mathematics is vital to all subject and fields that are scientific. And also play rolls in other fields such as economics. Having a basic Math skills will enable all students to communicate their ideas in the language that is accepted by their peers and experts too.
To conclude, it is true that a level of basic education should be ensured as much as possible in any nation education system. However, overly unifying the education system might be an overkill, because there are diverse groups with different needs in any nation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
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...n program. Adversly, it is true that some of the program should be standarsized, like fo...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'so', 'while', 'for example', 'such as', 'it is true']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.226158038147 0.240241500013 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.144414168937 0.157235817809 92% => OK
Adjectives: 0.111716621253 0.0880659088768 127% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0381471389646 0.0497285424764 77% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0354223433243 0.0444667217837 80% => OK
Prepositions: 0.136239782016 0.12292977631 111% => OK
Participles: 0.0272479564033 0.0406280797675 67% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.83304869365 2.79330140395 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0299727520436 0.030933414821 97% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.106267029973 0.0997080785238 107% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0326975476839 0.0249443105267 131% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0217983651226 0.0148568991511 147% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1963.0 2732.02544248 72% => OK
No of words: 332.0 452.878318584 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.91265060241 6.0361032391 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.58838876751 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.349397590361 0.366273622748 95% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.265060240964 0.280924506359 94% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.189759036145 0.200843997647 94% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.117469879518 0.132149295362 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83304869365 2.79330140395 101% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 219.290929204 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509036144578 0.48968727796 104% => OK
Word variations: 52.757201036 55.4138127331 95% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6194690265 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.4444444444 23.380412469 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1933112154 59.4972553346 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.055555556 141.124799967 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4444444444 23.380412469 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.611111111111 0.674092028746 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.21349557522 58% => OK
Readability: 44.9504685408 51.4728631049 87% => OK
Elegance: 1.7875 1.64882698954 108% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307902088252 0.391690518653 79% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.15023409567 0.123202303941 122% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0769904255511 0.077325440228 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.53501634576 0.547984918172 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.153932273393 0.149214159877 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114598657497 0.161403998019 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634029656158 0.0892212321368 71% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.249837130176 0.385218514788 65% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.025822920041 0.0692045440612 37% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192037596153 0.275328986314 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644228879937 0.0653680567796 99% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.4325221239 96% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30420353982 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88274336283 82% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 7.22455752212 125% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.66592920354 109% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.70907079646 111% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.5995575221 118% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.