A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Curriculum is one of the most important aspect to look after for shaping the educational system. I agree to some extent with the author that the government should require all the schools to teach the same curriculum until the college level.
If the government enforces to teach same curriculum this will ensure that all students will receive the same level of education which is very difficult otherwise. As this will ensure that students in remote places will also receive education same as the students from urban cities. For instance everyone will be taught computer education. This will furthur help the students with less resources to compete with the students having myriad of resources.
A national curriculum will also help in setting up a common entrance exam for all the students.And students can henceforth choose their majors in college. A national curriculum will also ensure that students can study their desired branch and will not have to worry if they will get their desired branch in college due to cut offs being high. This will help the impoverished class of students to uplift themselves.
Though it might be that not all the state governments will be able to provide the same level of education to all its students due to lack of resources and might get burdened by this. So, before impelementing a national curriculum the government should make sure that all its states have sufficient resources for implemeting the common curriculum. Also, having a common national curriculum may not be good at times as a curriculum must include regional languages as to make sure the cultural integrity is not lost which is not possible in a national curriculum. So, the states might need to make some changes to the curriculum. Finally, a national curriculum does not mean that we force students not to study subjects they are interested in as different students may have different interests. Thus, the schools must provide the students with all the resources they need.
In sum, i agree to the author's notion that a nation should have a national curriculum but there are some things that might have to be added as to the requirements of the students.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'hence', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'so', 'thus', 'as to', 'for instance']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.202597402597 0.240241500013 84% => OK
Verbs: 0.176623376623 0.157235817809 112% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0987012987013 0.0880659088768 112% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0467532467532 0.0497285424764 94% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0311688311688 0.0444667217837 70% => OK
Prepositions: 0.116883116883 0.12292977631 95% => OK
Participles: 0.0337662337662 0.0406280797675 83% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.66747477681 2.79330140395 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0467532467532 0.030933414821 151% => OK
Particles: 0.0025974025974 0.0016655270985 156% => OK
Determiners: 0.124675324675 0.0997080785238 125% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0649350649351 0.0249443105267 260% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.00779220779221 0.0148568991511 52% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2169.0 2732.02544248 79% => OK
No of words: 363.0 452.878318584 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.97520661157 6.0361032391 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.58838876751 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.349862258953 0.366273622748 96% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.264462809917 0.280924506359 94% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.209366391185 0.200843997647 104% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.123966942149 0.132149295362 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66747477681 2.79330140395 95% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 219.290929204 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.432506887052 0.48968727796 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 44.3347491925 55.4138127331 80% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6194690265 78% => OK
Sentence length: 22.6875 23.380412469 97% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8485566658 59.4972553346 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.5625 141.124799967 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6875 23.380412469 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6875 0.674092028746 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.21349557522 77% => OK
Readability: 49.1337809917 51.4728631049 95% => OK
Elegance: 1.38775510204 1.64882698954 84% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.474129621506 0.391690518653 121% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.170422056098 0.123202303941 138% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.101174669283 0.077325440228 131% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.625669832535 0.547984918172 114% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.170611431729 0.149214159877 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.195229995624 0.161403998019 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0799029682254 0.0892212321368 90% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.40082392671 0.385218514788 104% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0618722228025 0.0692045440612 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.302904109276 0.275328986314 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640409897991 0.0653680567796 98% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.4325221239 105% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88274336283 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 7.22455752212 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.5995575221 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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