A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.

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A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.

As, Nelson Mandela quoted "Education is the most powerful weapon which you can use to change the world". Presuming the above quote in my opinion a nation should have the same national curriculum for all of its student's until they enter college. I feel this policy would be the proper measure for a nation to select which students should be admitted to their college, moreover this policy once implemented would be appropriate for all the students to undergo same education procedure and same curriculum. As, now-a-days in India the curriculum for colleges varies from state to state so, I feel that the proper curriculum would bring whole nation to study same syllabus but, there should be also some freedom given to syllabus setters of the state to select few subjects or topics on their own.

Since, the children of a nation are its future there should be unbiased system and curriculum which they study this would be helpful in such a way that: for example if the student want to take entrance exam for the Engineering so it has the questions which is same for all nation. But, as a consequence of different syllabus students face problems in solving the questions. Although, it is considered that the syllabus for the tests would be covered in their curriculum but instead it is not well designed by state committee. In addition, it is also said that the level of the subjects and toughness of subject varies from state to state, Bihar Board is considered quite tougher as compared to the other such boards as they have lots of tougher questions. So, this is helpful for the students who have undergone through this syllabus and henceforth, the students are easily able to crack the competitive exams held in the nation for engineering. Further, the same curriculum would be beneficial for the students of the nation guarding refugees who have to shift from one state to the other during their tenure. So, the students face quite a big problem after their parents get transfer and usually take much time to get acquainted with the curriculum of the state. So, it would be beneficial for them if the nation have same syllabus.

The policy can be implemented in such a way that their is a representative from each state being called and the curriculum for the nation is decided by the group of people considering each and everyone's view. But, it should be seen that there are few extra subjects which the state can provide to students to enhance their level.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: than
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'hence', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'well', 'for example', 'i feel', 'in addition', 'in my opinion']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.237580993521 0.240241500013 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.159827213823 0.157235817809 102% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0755939524838 0.0880659088768 86% => OK
Adverbs: 0.036717062635 0.0497285424764 74% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0496760259179 0.0444667217837 112% => OK
Prepositions: 0.125269978402 0.12292977631 102% => OK
Participles: 0.0410367170626 0.0406280797675 101% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.58708983021 2.79330140395 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.036717062635 0.030933414821 119% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.116630669546 0.0997080785238 117% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0323974082073 0.0249443105267 130% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0172786177106 0.0148568991511 116% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2477.0 2732.02544248 91% => OK
No of words: 426.0 452.878318584 94% => OK
Chars per words: 5.81455399061 6.0361032391 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.58838876751 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.323943661972 0.366273622748 88% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.234741784038 0.280924506359 84% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.176056338028 0.200843997647 88% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0962441314554 0.132149295362 73% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58708983021 2.79330140395 93% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 219.290929204 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.441314553991 0.48968727796 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 47.7754659362 55.4138127331 86% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6194690265 68% => OK
Sentence length: 30.4285714286 23.380412469 130% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.6759219766 59.4972553346 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 176.928571429 141.124799967 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.4285714286 23.380412469 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.785714285714 0.674092028746 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.94800884956 61% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.21349557522 38% => OK
Readability: 53.9027498323 51.4728631049 105% => OK
Elegance: 1.64035087719 1.64882698954 99% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.414103816969 0.391690518653 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.161130483202 0.123202303941 131% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0776057798818 0.077325440228 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.604349148341 0.547984918172 110% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.123681363399 0.149214159877 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.203407858413 0.161403998019 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127289931064 0.0892212321368 143% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.613952538495 0.385218514788 159% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0328747508003 0.0692045440612 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.327745694426 0.275328986314 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119296580408 0.0653680567796 182% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.4325221239 77% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.30420353982 57% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88274336283 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 7.22455752212 111% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.70907079646 111% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.5995575221 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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