A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
"Education is the most powerful weapon which you can use to change the world" as quoted by Nelson Mandela is indeed true. As, it has been asserted that a nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college, in my opinion would be a great recommendation. Since, the children of nation are its future they should have proper education and intellectual development.
Since, India is a nation with diverse curriculum that varies from state to state has various problems associated due to this. So, a proper and focused curriculum is required for all the students across the nation. This would be helpful in such a way that all the students will study same syllabus until they enter their college. In addition, all the students are suppose to appear for the entrance exam to get a seat in a college. Moreover, as they would have studied same syllabus it would be a unbiased process to admit them to college as with diverse curriculum it happens that few student are well aware about the questions in exam and are acquainted to it as others might not have studied. The other beneficial thing about the same curriculum woule be for the children of those parents who are in defense and get transfer from every year or two. So, this affect the study of their children as they are not able to cope up with the curriculum that is different for different states provided that if the curriculum is same they would face less problem.
Perhaps, it is also to be seen that the state is allowed to have few subjects of their own choice as the language spoken varies with state. Moreover, it could also happen that few students get acquainted with the new curriculum and few students lack behind. So, taking that in mind the syllabus should be very well set. There should also be liability given to state about having few different subjects which would provide enough learning and intellectual development of student as every student is different and each one have unique characteristics. Given the liability to choose few subjects of own would also bring students of diverse area of knowledge to the college and this would be beneficial in such a way that in college new innovations would can be done with conflicting ideas than having the same knowledge.
I would like to conclude that same curriculum have its own pros and cons provided how we implement it.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'well', 'in addition', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.206666666667 0.240241500013 86% => OK
Verbs: 0.175555555556 0.157235817809 112% => OK
Adjectives: 0.104444444444 0.0880659088768 119% => OK
Adverbs: 0.04 0.0497285424764 80% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0533333333333 0.0444667217837 120% => OK
Prepositions: 0.128888888889 0.12292977631 105% => OK
Participles: 0.0444444444444 0.0406280797675 109% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.60118788713 2.79330140395 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0355555555556 0.030933414821 115% => OK
Particles: 0.00222222222222 0.0016655270985 133% => OK
Determiners: 0.0933333333333 0.0997080785238 94% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0422222222222 0.0249443105267 169% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0133333333333 0.0148568991511 90% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2417.0 2732.02544248 88% => OK
No of words: 417.0 452.878318584 92% => OK
Chars per words: 5.79616306954 6.0361032391 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.58838876751 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.31654676259 0.366273622748 86% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.235011990408 0.280924506359 84% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.175059952038 0.200843997647 87% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0911270983213 0.132149295362 69% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60118788713 2.79330140395 93% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 219.290929204 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.441247002398 0.48968727796 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 47.4409318748 55.4138127331 86% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6194690265 78% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0625 23.380412469 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.5380820228 59.4972553346 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.0625 141.124799967 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0625 23.380412469 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.4375 0.674092028746 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.21349557522 115% => OK
Readability: 49.5636990408 51.4728631049 96% => OK
Elegance: 1.4132231405 1.64882698954 86% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.435947504188 0.391690518653 111% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.14588125474 0.123202303941 118% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0640005474476 0.077325440228 83% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.554241636363 0.547984918172 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.156896070883 0.149214159877 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.189620344241 0.161403998019 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134015564251 0.0892212321368 150% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.399962067544 0.385218514788 104% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.151011130619 0.0692045440612 218% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.304456157519 0.275328986314 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.147164922759 0.0653680567796 225% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.4325221239 96% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30420353982 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88274336283 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 7.22455752212 138% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.66592920354 109% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.5995575221 118% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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