A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
The issue stated sounds dictatorial. Its mandatory nature makes me not to agree with the statement. The part of the sentence "all of its students" comprise a very wide variety of students, each having a different set of caliber and hence they should be taught according to their respective capabilities.
Einstein the great scientist, once said "If you judge a fish by its capability to climb, then it will live its whole life thinking that it is dumb". He himself faced this conundrum while in school, teachers used to send him out of class and used to call him retard. Therefore, it is important to realize that every student is unique and is capable of doing great things. And that is why, our education system should be effective enough to elicit that one thing that a student might do efficiently.
Earlier, everything used to be made for general public use "what fits all". However nowadays with advancement in science and technology, everything is customized and cut out uniquely for person. For example- customized cars, customized house, customized mobile phones, customized vacation plans etc. However, the one thing which has not changed from centuries is our teaching style. It is still following that one fits all culture, where a teachers teaches same thing to all students. Therefore, it is imperative to customize our education too so that, every child gets a cut out education and focus on what he really excel in.
Coming to the other side of the issue, it can be beneficial to provide same kind of education to all students. As this will ensure, equal exposure to all fields and to all students, which might in fact be construed as fundamental to provide equal opportunities to all students. But this in fact is depriving students of opportunities they can actually focus and become successful.
In conclusion, it is not right to force a student to study a subject he is not interested or do not want to pursue. Although basic subjects, which provide essential, universal knowledge should be mandatory, but specialized subjects should be optional. This way we can ensure a bright future for student, who will be capable of foreseeing the line of trade he wants to pursue.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 41, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...Earlier, everything used to be made for general public use 'what fits all'. However ...
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Line 4, column 86, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...l public use 'what fits all'. However nowadays with advancement in science an...
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Line 4, column 448, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a teacher' or simply 'teachers'?
Suggestion: a teacher; teachers
...lowing that one fits all culture, where a teachers teaches same thing to all students. The...
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Line 4, column 505, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s same thing to all students. Therefore, it is imperative to customize our educat...
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Line 4, column 629, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'excels'.
Suggestion: excels
...t education and focus on what he really excel in. Coming to the other side of the ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'but', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'really', 'so', 'still', 'then', 'therefore', 'while', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'in fact', 'kind of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.190255220418 0.240241500013 79% => OK
Verbs: 0.178654292343 0.157235817809 114% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0904872389791 0.0880659088768 103% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0510440835267 0.0497285424764 103% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0626450116009 0.0444667217837 141% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0858468677494 0.12292977631 70% => OK
Participles: 0.0417633410673 0.0406280797675 103% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.84968512525 2.79330140395 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0487238979118 0.030933414821 158% => OK
Particles: 0.0046403712297 0.0016655270985 279% => OK
Determiners: 0.0812064965197 0.0997080785238 81% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0278422273782 0.0249443105267 112% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0185614849188 0.0148568991511 125% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2229.0 2732.02544248 82% => OK
No of words: 371.0 452.878318584 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.00808625337 6.0361032391 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.58838876751 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.355795148248 0.366273622748 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.285714285714 0.280924506359 102% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.215633423181 0.200843997647 107% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.159029649596 0.132149295362 120% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84968512525 2.79330140395 102% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 219.290929204 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563342318059 0.48968727796 115% => OK
Word variations: 63.9046413317 55.4138127331 115% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6194690265 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.5263157895 23.380412469 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7850752462 59.4972553346 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.315789474 141.124799967 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5263157895 23.380412469 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.789473684211 0.674092028746 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.21349557522 96% => OK
Readability: 48.0977443609 51.4728631049 93% => OK
Elegance: 1.0873015873 1.64882698954 66% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27782848258 0.391690518653 71% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.104861759944 0.123202303941 85% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0792061233907 0.077325440228 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.495898785194 0.547984918172 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.146057132428 0.149214159877 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0986269889438 0.161403998019 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0827077318845 0.0892212321368 93% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.263115581641 0.385218514788 68% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0522245119506 0.0692045440612 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189163906116 0.275328986314 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0911544416223 0.0653680567796 139% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.4325221239 96% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30420353982 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88274336283 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 7.22455752212 125% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.66592920354 109% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.70907079646 148% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.5995575221 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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