As stated a nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college is purely a different idea to which I disagree.
As in a nation there are many kind of people with different economical status that is people who are rich ,who are below poverty line and middle class people.Even people in each and every above class are again sub divided based on their revenues or income.In this vast diversities of economical status's asking all the people to do the same thing is like asking a richer person to behave like a poor man or asking a poor man to act like a rich one is not definite.why for the given statement there is need to discuss economical status's ? I would like to answer this with an better example suppose there is a kid who is son of a poor man studying his first grade and the cost of his books after making the same curriculum
nation wide is lets say $10 which the poor kids father cannot afford which might lead to school drop of a poor kid even though free education is provided In a same nation there might be students with different IQ levels, If the curriculum is made same all over the nation wide students with low IQ level cannot perform up to the mark and might lead to their discontinuing from the school which leads to increase in literacy rate.
For example if the curriculum is made same all over the nation student who want to pursue science in his college no need to study spanish language in which he is not interested.
Hence it is better to provide curriculum in perspective of different economical levels ,different IQ levels and for different proffessions they want to pursue
as which is going in India.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Suggestion: many kinds
...I disagree. As in a nation there are many kind of people with different economical sta...
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Suggestion: kinds
...agree. As in a nation there are many kind of people with different economical sta...
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Suggestion: economic
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...ow poverty line and middle class people.Even people in each and every above class ar...
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Suggestion: In
...vided based on their revenues or income.In this vast diversities of economical sta...
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...books after making the same curriculum nation wide is lets say 0 which the poor kids fathe...
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...he curriculum is made same all over the nation wide students with low IQ level cannot perfo...
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...guage in which he is not interested. Hence it is better to provide curriculum in p...
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Suggestion: ,
...rspective of different economical levels ,different IQ levels and for different pr...
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'hence', 'if', 'so', 'for example', 'kind of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.231012658228 0.240241500013 96% => OK
Verbs: 0.180379746835 0.157235817809 115% => OK
Adjectives: 0.117088607595 0.0880659088768 133% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0316455696203 0.0497285424764 64% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0379746835443 0.0444667217837 85% => OK
Prepositions: 0.123417721519 0.12292977631 100% => OK
Participles: 0.0411392405063 0.0406280797675 101% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.45771462358 2.79330140395 88% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0474683544304 0.030933414821 153% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.104430379747 0.0997080785238 105% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0221518987342 0.0249443105267 89% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0348101265823 0.0148568991511 234% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1688.0 2732.02544248 62% => OK
No of words: 307.0 452.878318584 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4983713355 6.0361032391 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.58838876751 91% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.293159609121 0.366273622748 80% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.172638436482 0.280924506359 61% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.117263843648 0.200843997647 58% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0846905537459 0.132149295362 64% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45771462358 2.79330140395 88% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 219.290929204 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488599348534 0.48968727796 100% => OK
Word variations: 48.5991783134 55.4138127331 88% => OK
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6194690265 24% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 61.4 23.380412469 263% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 196.308940194 59.4972553346 330% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 337.6 141.124799967 239% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 61.4 23.380412469 263% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.2 0.674092028746 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.94800884956 121% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.21349557522 230% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 78.6638436482 51.4728631049 153% => OK
Elegance: 1.58227848101 1.64882698954 96% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.377188747168 0.391690518653 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.25044686789 0.123202303941 203% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0800075786437 0.077325440228 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.929095426255 0.547984918172 170% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.142518699451 0.149214159877 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.289262843277 0.161403998019 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.228644486832 0.0892212321368 256% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.233221657679 0.385218514788 61% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0990855840594 0.0692045440612 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24734596507 0.275328986314 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.230596351146 0.0653680567796 353% => Less connections among paragraphs
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.4325221239 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.30420353982 57% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88274336283 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 2.0 7.22455752212 28% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.70907079646 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 5.0 13.5995575221 37% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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