A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
In today's highly competitive world all the students of the nation have to be provided with the same curriculum till they enter the college life. This would help in creating the common platform for all the students across the nation where they can be compared with each other. This would also be helpful to conduct some competitions so that all the students from the nation could participate.
Let us consider an example of India where an exam named JEE-MAINS is conducted nationwide to admit the students into the most prestigious colleges in the country. This exam serves as a common platform for the selection of the students. The government of Indian has prescribed certain curriculum to be followed and the test makes also follow the same curriculum. Therefore it is mandatory for all the students to study the same curriculum if they would like to give the test. These are some regions which have their own curriculum that is being taught to the students of that region. This poses the difficulty to the students as they have to study both the curriculums. Instead if the curriculum had been nationalised then this problem would have been eradicated and the students would be referring the same curriculum throughout.
Additionally, let us consider the example of a student going to school. If different regions would have followed different curriculums then, it would have been difficult for that student to get accustomed to the change in curriculum, whenever he changes from one region to the other. It is also quite possible that some regions may have a rigorous curriculum whereas some may not. If the student changes between such a curriculum then it would be difficult for him to cope up with the remaining students.
All in all the curriculum throughout the nation has to be made common so that the students could be placed on the same platform. It could also serve as a source to evaluate each and every student of the nation individually and they could be trained further so that they could be useful to the country.
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...at they could be useful to the country.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'whereas', 'as to']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.177595628415 0.240241500013 74% => OK
Verbs: 0.188524590164 0.157235817809 120% => OK
Adjectives: 0.068306010929 0.0880659088768 78% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0437158469945 0.0497285424764 88% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0437158469945 0.0444667217837 98% => OK
Prepositions: 0.120218579235 0.12292977631 98% => OK
Participles: 0.0601092896175 0.0406280797675 148% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.66955559726 2.79330140395 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0464480874317 0.030933414821 150% => OK
Particles: 0.00273224043716 0.0016655270985 164% => OK
Determiners: 0.169398907104 0.0997080785238 170% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0437158469945 0.0249443105267 175% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0136612021858 0.0148568991511 92% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2096.0 2732.02544248 77% => OK
No of words: 347.0 452.878318584 77% => More words wanted.
Chars per words: 6.04034582133 6.0361032391 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.58838876751 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.322766570605 0.366273622748 88% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.259365994236 0.280924506359 92% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.193083573487 0.200843997647 96% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.121037463977 0.132149295362 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66955559726 2.79330140395 96% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 219.290929204 69% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.435158501441 0.48968727796 89% => OK
Word variations: 43.9809495244 55.4138127331 79% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6194690265 78% => OK
Sentence length: 21.6875 23.380412469 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3494896217 59.4972553346 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.0 141.124799967 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6875 23.380412469 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.674092028746 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.21349557522 153% => OK
Readability: 47.6240994236 51.4728631049 93% => OK
Elegance: 1.29702970297 1.64882698954 79% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.492250364049 0.391690518653 126% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.153413109123 0.123202303941 125% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0808111854165 0.077325440228 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.646704046726 0.547984918172 118% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.136800239207 0.149214159877 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.259470644166 0.161403998019 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101712510889 0.0892212321368 114% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.492390515779 0.385218514788 128% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.138490788091 0.0692045440612 200% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.375247081753 0.275328986314 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0905113586929 0.0653680567796 138% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.4325221239 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.30420353982 94% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88274336283 82% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 7.22455752212 97% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 3.66592920354 136% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.70907079646 111% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.5995575221 110% => OK
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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