In younger age, some type of general knowledge is required hence should be given to all students as well as children have no known of their interest. Due to this reason they can be easily influenced by society and go on wrong path. Government therefore should impose same study plan for all students until they go for graduation program. In accordance to this arguments I completely in harmony with given statement. I will further elaborate my stand in ensuing paragraph.
First, if all students are following same course then they can have not only competitive atmosphere but also cooperation ambiance. They can learn from each other as well as in exam, due to competition, they work sincerely. There are some basic things that every student should know. Mathematics, Science , History, Language and many other subject are the subject that every student has to know irrespective of their interest in another subjects. By knowing these subjects, they can survive in society.
Second, at younger age, children do not know their field of interest and can easily influenced by the others. For example in younger age every child has dream of being actor influenced by movies. If national curriculum is being followed then up to the age they are not able to think of themselves they just have to study the given course. In India, many engineering students are influenced by the society and other people and that's why they choose this stream.
In conclusion, same study material should be learned up to certain age though some people counter argue that from younger age only they should be allowed to chase their dreams. But this thing does not work as they cannot have competition and will not work with their full potential.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 356, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...or graduation program. In accordance to this arguments I completely in harmony with ...
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Line 3, column 304, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...tudent should know. Mathematics, Science , History, Language and many other subjec...
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Line 5, column 85, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'influence'
Suggestion: influence
... their field of interest and can easily influenced by the others. For example in younger a...
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Line 5, column 154, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'dreamed', 'dreamt'.
Suggestion: dreamed; dreamt
... example in younger age every child has dream of being actor influenced by movies. If...
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Line 5, column 197, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...am of being actor influenced by movies. If national curriculum is being followed t...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'hence', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'well', 'as to', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.235294117647 0.240241500013 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.167182662539 0.157235817809 106% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0681114551084 0.0880659088768 77% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0681114551084 0.0497285424764 137% => OK
Pronouns: 0.061919504644 0.0444667217837 139% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.120743034056 0.12292977631 98% => OK
Participles: 0.0526315789474 0.0406280797675 130% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.56351399836 2.79330140395 92% => OK
Infinitives: 0.030959752322 0.030933414821 100% => OK
Particles: 0.0030959752322 0.0016655270985 186% => OK
Determiners: 0.0712074303406 0.0997080785238 71% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0402476780186 0.0249443105267 161% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00928792569659 0.0148568991511 63% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1732.0 2732.02544248 63% => OK
No of words: 291.0 452.878318584 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.95189003436 6.0361032391 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.58838876751 90% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.329896907216 0.366273622748 90% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.268041237113 0.280924506359 95% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.168384879725 0.200843997647 84% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.113402061856 0.132149295362 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56351399836 2.79330140395 92% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 219.290929204 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53264604811 0.48968727796 109% => OK
Word variations: 53.8849913173 55.4138127331 97% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6194690265 78% => OK
Sentence length: 18.1875 23.380412469 78% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8637694763 59.4972553346 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.25 141.124799967 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1875 23.380412469 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.875 0.674092028746 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.21349557522 96% => OK
Readability: 44.9916237113 51.4728631049 87% => OK
Elegance: 1.375 1.64882698954 83% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275454490131 0.391690518653 70% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0850212611299 0.123202303941 69% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0678223666644 0.077325440228 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.466293672533 0.547984918172 85% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.102822924553 0.149214159877 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0960166790639 0.161403998019 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.079996529505 0.0892212321368 90% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.288099712918 0.385218514788 75% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0449526067491 0.0692045440612 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184301307594 0.275328986314 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369723971101 0.0653680567796 57% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.4325221239 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30420353982 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88274336283 123% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 7.22455752212 69% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.70907079646 111% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 13.5995575221 81% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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