Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state
In a world where many people find themselves surrounded by endless skyscrapers and cement, it is important for a nation's government to pass laws to preserve wilderness. Though it may cause the government to spend more to fund such laws, there are ways for this land to bring in revenue to support itself. These laws will have a positive influence on our nation for many reasons.
By preserving the wilderness in its natural state, this ensures the preservation of wildlife occupying the area. Both land and animals are inversely reliant on each other. For example, if the land was not preserved, corporations could inhabit the land polluting the ground or any river nearby. This pollution would have a detrimental effect on the wildlife such as fish that reproduce in that area or any animals that live off the plants surrounding the river. Providing a safe, clean environment not only for animals but for people as well will ensure revenues for the government and local businesses.
Many people who live within city limits will venture out towards the wilderness to escape the hassles of everyday life. For example, the Grand Canyon National Park and Yellowstone Nation Park receive millions of visitors each year. With this, the government can bring in tourists to camp or rent cabins to stay in during their visit. Not only will the government see the benefits, but local businesses will prosper as well. The local residents will also enjoy many leisure activities provided by the preserved wilderness.
Reservations or parks are among the few explorations that everyday people can experience without spending too much money. Locals around the preserved wilderness can take advantage of having pristine land accessible in minutes. For example, many people who live in a rural environment enjoy activities such as riding bikes, hiking, camping, mountain climbing, and fishing. Without preserved land, locals could not enjoy many of these pleasures.
For the reasons stated above, a nation’s government should pass laws that to keep wilderness in their natural state.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 114, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'well', 'for example', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.27345844504 0.240241500013 114% => OK
Verbs: 0.128686327078 0.157235817809 82% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0938337801609 0.0880659088768 107% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0402144772118 0.0497285424764 81% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0214477211796 0.0444667217837 48% => OK
Prepositions: 0.120643431635 0.12292977631 98% => OK
Participles: 0.0348525469169 0.0406280797675 86% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.70061006449 2.79330140395 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0268096514745 0.030933414821 87% => OK
Particles: 0.00268096514745 0.0016655270985 161% => OK
Determiners: 0.109919571046 0.0997080785238 110% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0375335120643 0.0249443105267 150% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0134048257373 0.0148568991511 90% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2085.0 2732.02544248 76% => OK
No of words: 335.0 452.878318584 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.22388059701 6.0361032391 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.58838876751 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.385074626866 0.366273622748 105% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.286567164179 0.280924506359 102% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.211940298507 0.200843997647 106% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.146268656716 0.132149295362 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70061006449 2.79330140395 97% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 219.290929204 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558208955224 0.48968727796 114% => OK
Word variations: 60.8416347328 55.4138127331 110% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6194690265 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.6111111111 23.380412469 80% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.6033969522 59.4972553346 50% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.833333333 141.124799967 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6111111111 23.380412469 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.444444444444 0.674092028746 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.21349557522 19% => OK
Readability: 47.267827529 51.4728631049 92% => OK
Elegance: 2.25352112676 1.64882698954 137% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204663009717 0.391690518653 52% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0771633058367 0.123202303941 63% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0766603653616 0.077325440228 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.534091909715 0.547984918172 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.163281005492 0.149214159877 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787671700921 0.161403998019 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10356504429 0.0892212321368 116% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.245049642025 0.385218514788 64% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.129150713439 0.0692045440612 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168503906525 0.275328986314 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130631598859 0.0653680567796 200% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.4325221239 144% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.30420353982 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88274336283 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 7.22455752212 166% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 3.66592920354 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.70907079646 111% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.5995575221 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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