Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state, even if these areas could be developed for economic gain.
“When the last tree has been cut, and the last fish caught and the last river poisoned, only then we will realize that we cannot eat money “, a Native American maxim, clearly showcases the wrong ideology of our society and the priorities we set in our lives. It is so evident that with technological advancement, human are becoming materialistic and selfish. But sadly, such lifestyles comes at a heavy price of disturbing and destroying the natural environments. Human needs and greed has increased many folds while the earth’s system of replenishing resources is at the same pace. Thus to satisfy such demands, the humans have penetrated into the natural environments resulting in great imbalance among its elements.
In order to become ‘developed’ we have cleared forests and destroyed ecosystems to create monstrous cities with ginormous built form. Humans have destroyed the earth with activities such as mining and oil extraction. The top soil which is the most critical for growing flora has been heavily meddled with and damaged it. Moreover human activities has also resulted in poisoning and populating the water and air too. But sadly the humans don’t realize that to sustain such monstrous urban areas we need natural environment as well. Thus destroying natural environments has resulted in harming ourselves directly and indirectly.
The earth doesn’t need humans, humans need the earth. According to research, if humans cease to exist today, the earth will degrade and destroy all the evidence pertaining to human existence and forget about human species all together. Human have to realize that they are not superior to any other sort of species or above them. Instead they are very much a part of the ecosystem with a role to play in it. We depend on the entire ecosystem for our existence. The earlier the humans realize this fact, we can hope for a better future.
Thus preserving nature has now become one of the most critical issues of the 21st century and no economic gain can ever supersede the environmental benefits of wilderness in their natural state. Moreover this task cannot be taken over by any one individual or organization. It has to be a collective effort which has to be taken up by nations, organizations and agencies across the world. Creation and amendment of polices and law and educating the masses should be done, involving all the organizations and agencies, to increase the awareness about preserving nature only then we can hope for a better future for ourselves.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 386, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'lifestyles'' or 'lifestyle's'?
Suggestion: lifestyles'; lifestyle's
...erialistic and selfish. But sadly, such lifestyles comes at a heavy price of disturbing an...
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Line 1, column 599, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...enishing resources is at the same pace. Thus to satisfy such demands, the humans hav...
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Line 3, column 332, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...en heavily meddled with and damaged it. Moreover human activities has also resulted in p...
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Line 5, column 335, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Instead,
...ny other sort of species or above them. Instead they are very much a part of the ecosys...
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Line 5, column 466, Rule ID: THE_EXACTLY_THE[1]
Message: Duplicated 'the' in the phrase: 'The earlier the'. Did you mean 'earlier the'?
Suggestion: Earlier the
...the entire ecosystem for our existence. The earlier the humans realize this fact, we can hope f...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...act, we can hope for a better future. Thus preserving nature has now become on...
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Line 7, column 196, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...s of wilderness in their natural state. Moreover this task cannot be taken over by any o...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'then', 'thus', 'well', 'while', 'as to', 'sort of', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.207983193277 0.240241500013 87% => OK
Verbs: 0.178571428571 0.157235817809 114% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0987394957983 0.0880659088768 112% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0672268907563 0.0497285424764 135% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0441176470588 0.0444667217837 99% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0882352941176 0.12292977631 72% => OK
Participles: 0.0651260504202 0.0406280797675 160% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.87317342124 2.79330140395 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0273109243697 0.030933414821 88% => OK
Particles: 0.00420168067227 0.0016655270985 252% => OK
Determiners: 0.0924369747899 0.0997080785238 93% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0189075630252 0.0249443105267 76% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0063025210084 0.0148568991511 42% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2557.0 2732.02544248 94% => OK
No of words: 416.0 452.878318584 92% => OK
Chars per words: 6.14663461538 6.0361032391 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.58838876751 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.362980769231 0.366273622748 99% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.276442307692 0.280924506359 98% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.199519230769 0.200843997647 99% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.151442307692 0.132149295362 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87317342124 2.79330140395 103% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 219.290929204 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555288461538 0.48968727796 113% => OK
Word variations: 64.7927630155 55.4138127331 117% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6194690265 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.8095238095 23.380412469 85% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4361801356 59.4972553346 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.761904762 141.124799967 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8095238095 23.380412469 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.571428571429 0.674092028746 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.21349557522 134% => OK
Readability: 47.4537545788 51.4728631049 92% => OK
Elegance: 1.24637681159 1.64882698954 76% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121811214604 0.391690518653 31% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.106460233459 0.123202303941 86% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0691471918024 0.077325440228 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.47604917101 0.547984918172 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.122728358552 0.149214159877 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478526533429 0.161403998019 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362622644813 0.0892212321368 41% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.398166809414 0.385218514788 103% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0554871247449 0.0692045440612 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0890569970114 0.275328986314 32% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427198211811 0.0653680567796 65% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.4325221239 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.30420353982 207% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88274336283 82% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 7.22455752212 69% => OK
Negative topic words: 7.0 3.66592920354 191% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.5995575221 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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