Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state, even if these areas could be developed for economic gain.
Preserving the natural habitat and areas of a nation is undertaken by passing laws and regulations which prevent exploitation of the wilderness areas for economic gain. It is in the hands of the particular nation and its leading bodies to preserve the heritage of their nation rather than use the wilderness areas for the economic gain. The laws help in preserving the natural habitat.
Firstly, by passing laws and rules, it brings in a sense of awareness among the people about the state of the existing natural habitat. The awareness could further urge them to contribute by following the rule and regulations.
Secondly, in order to gain economy by exploiting or making use of the existing natural wilderness areas would be too harsh on the other existing species which depend on these natural areas for shelter and food. Nations could arrive at other methods to increase their economy- make allies with neighboring nations or increase trade with other nations and so on.
Also, the natural areas contribute to the balance of the entire ecosystem in numerous ways. For instance: the influence of rainfall on the climate of the country, and hence the growth of food for human consumption. And such other balance for which the wilderness contributes to is a necessity for the entire nation.
In conclusion, the assurance that the rules might not be accepted and followed by everyone in the nation and the expense of preserving the natural state might increase. But for the above mentioned reasons, preserving the natural wilderness is vital and necessary.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'hence', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'as for', 'for instance', 'in conclusion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.259927797834 0.240241500013 108% => OK
Verbs: 0.129963898917 0.157235817809 83% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0938628158845 0.0880659088768 107% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0324909747292 0.0497285424764 65% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0216606498195 0.0444667217837 49% => OK
Prepositions: 0.15523465704 0.12292977631 126% => OK
Participles: 0.0541516245487 0.0406280797675 133% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.67968266365 2.79330140395 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0216606498195 0.030933414821 70% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.129963898917 0.0997080785238 130% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0180505415162 0.0249443105267 72% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0108303249097 0.0148568991511 73% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1573.0 2732.02544248 58% => OK
No of words: 257.0 452.878318584 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.12062256809 6.0361032391 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.58838876751 87% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.369649805447 0.366273622748 101% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.307392996109 0.280924506359 109% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.206225680934 0.200843997647 103% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.128404669261 0.132149295362 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67968266365 2.79330140395 96% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 219.290929204 57% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482490272374 0.48968727796 99% => OK
Word variations: 44.9684186663 55.4138127331 81% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6194690265 58% => OK
Sentence length: 21.4166666667 23.380412469 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7215780695 59.4972553346 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.083333333 141.124799967 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4166666667 23.380412469 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.916666666667 0.674092028746 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.21349557522 38% => OK
Readability: 52.1559662776 51.4728631049 101% => OK
Elegance: 2.54901960784 1.64882698954 155% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198749429381 0.391690518653 51% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.193127774463 0.123202303941 157% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.101623512578 0.077325440228 131% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.737202864546 0.547984918172 135% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0946297458074 0.149214159877 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113226258763 0.161403998019 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585552169029 0.0892212321368 66% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.390351847635 0.385218514788 101% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.142177050822 0.0692045440612 205% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14386965263 0.275328986314 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0679983835853 0.0653680567796 104% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.4325221239 96% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.30420353982 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88274336283 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 7.22455752212 138% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 3.66592920354 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.70907079646 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 10.0 13.5995575221 74% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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