Nations should suspend govt. funding for
the arts when significant numbers of their
citizens are hungry and unemployed.
The author in the above issue talks about suspending government funding for arts for the welfare of the hungry and unemployment. Accordingly, I persist on being of the opinion that mere suspension for funding for arts will not be best option for welfare of the citizens. There are multiple reason for my agreement with this view. I shall endeavour my perceptions for the above paragraph.
Firstly, The above statement indicates that we should stop funding for the arts with consideration to the welfare of the citizens. But as the above statement suggest, We cannot take it for the granted that there will be hike in the number of the employment and hungry. However, A specific survey must be carried out for the funding in arts thereby taking this brutal step.
Secondly, As Tourism plays a vital role in the nation economy. If we stop funding of the arts the tourism will also be get effected thereby resulting into the lack of symmetry in national income. An appropriate survey of the dependence on the tourism must be made to make an decession. Art tend to be the beauty of any nation, being the real gem. Relinquishing them may bring an end to the Indian culture. Also, funding fails to give an assurance regarding the welfare of people
Thirdly, Government should carry out a specific survey for the investment done on different resources of art to that of the result obtain due to this. Yet additional investment would not play a major role in contribution. However, the government should stop funding for by such resources the national income would be saved. Eventually, Development of the Nation lies in the development of Issue: Nations should suspend govt. funding for the arts when significant numbers of their citizens are hungry and unemployed.
The author in the above issue talks about suspending government funding for arts for the welfare of the hungry and unemployment. Accordingly, I persist on being of the opinion that mere suspension for funding for arts will not be best option for welfare of the citizens. There are multiple reason for my agreement with this view. I shall endeavour my perceptions for the above paragraph.
Firstly, The above statement indicates that we should stop funding for the arts with consideration to the welfare of the citizens. But as the above statement suggest, We cannot take it for the granted that there will be hike in the number of the employment and hungry. However, A specific survey must be carried out for the funding in arts thereby taking this brutal step.
Secondly, As Tourism plays a vital role in the nation economy. If we stop funding of the arts the tourism will also be get effected thereby resulting into the lack of symmetry in national income. An appropriate survey of the dependence on the tourism must be made to make an decession. Art tend to be the beauty of any nation, being the real gem. Relinquishing them may bring an end to the Indian culture. Also, funding fails to give an assurance regarding the welfare of people
Thirdly, Government should carry out a specific survey for the investment done on different resources of art to that of the result obtain due to this. Yet additional investment would not play a major role in contribution. However, the government should stop funding for by such resources the national income would be saved. Eventually, Development of the Nation lies in the development of the Art. So It may give a major effect for the welfare of the nation. But on this assumption, We cannot risk for the nation.
Thus to wrap discussion over this issues, consolidating all the perspectives in one, I would like to say that all the decision should be taken by government to fight the national problems have to be very careful and must be conscious only after observing all the thing in one, all the aftereffects of what will be there after decision. And As they suggest, abandoning of arts funding should be considered as the last option.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 228, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'be the best'.
Suggestion: be the best
...uspension for funding for arts will not be best option for welfare of the citizens. The...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ays a vital role in the nation economy. If we stop funding of the arts the tourism...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...nce on the tourism must be made to make an decession. Art tend to be the beauty of...
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Line 5, column 227, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'be the best'.
Suggestion: be the best
...uspension for funding for arts will not be best option for welfare of the citizens. The...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ays a vital role in the nation economy. If we stop funding of the arts the tourism...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...nce on the tourism must be made to make an decession. Art tend to be the beauty of...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...mption, We cannot risk for the nation. Thus to wrap discussion over this issues, co...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...e nation. Thus to wrap discussion over this issues, consolidating all the perspecti...
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Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: thereafter
...e, all the aftereffects of what will be there after decision. And As they suggest, abandoni...
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Discourse Markers used:
['accordingly', 'also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'regarding', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'third', 'thirdly', 'thus', 'as to']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.237196765499 0.240241500013 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.133423180593 0.157235817809 85% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0727762803235 0.0880659088768 83% => OK
Adverbs: 0.044474393531 0.0497285424764 89% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0309973045822 0.0444667217837 70% => OK
Prepositions: 0.150943396226 0.12292977631 123% => OK
Participles: 0.0485175202156 0.0406280797675 119% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.72923622083 2.79330140395 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0242587601078 0.030933414821 78% => OK
Particles: 0.00269541778976 0.0016655270985 162% => OK
Determiners: 0.137466307278 0.0997080785238 138% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0458221024259 0.0249443105267 184% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.00539083557951 0.0148568991511 36% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3950.0 2732.02544248 145% => OK
No of words: 676.0 452.878318584 149% => OK
Chars per words: 5.84319526627 6.0361032391 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.09901951359 4.58838876751 111% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.337278106509 0.366273622748 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.258875739645 0.280924506359 92% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.174556213018 0.200843997647 87% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.12573964497 0.132149295362 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72923622083 2.79330140395 98% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 219.290929204 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.278106508876 0.48968727796 57% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 36.3397083584 55.4138127331 66% => OK
How many sentences: 37.0 20.6194690265 179% => OK
Sentence length: 18.2702702703 23.380412469 78% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.8993190247 59.4972553346 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.756756757 141.124799967 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2702702703 23.380412469 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.432432432432 0.674092028746 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.94800884956 182% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.21349557522 173% => OK
Readability: 44.1578442348 51.4728631049 86% => OK
Elegance: 2.09032258065 1.64882698954 127% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155113874422 0.391690518653 40% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.121598878336 0.123202303941 99% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0724525575587 0.077325440228 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.576314756712 0.547984918172 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.162154617177 0.149214159877 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709560323327 0.161403998019 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0875946011473 0.0892212321368 98% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.510047733315 0.385218514788 132% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.071378528679 0.0692045440612 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113818845476 0.275328986314 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0651316896875 0.0653680567796 100% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.4325221239 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 18.0 5.30420353982 339% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88274336283 143% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 7.22455752212 97% => OK
Negative topic words: 16.0 3.66592920354 436% => Less negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.70907079646 185% => OK
Total topic words: 28.0 13.5995575221 206% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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