Only through mistakes can there be discovery or progress.
Life is ever learning progress for all the human being to sustain and endeavor for the benefit of society. Attempting, analyzing and making mistakes while implementing any new conviction is a cycle to give birth to any new miracle or life changing ideas. A small new born kid will learn eventually by falling, crawling and will then walk by his own, Same way this world works in same manner. Everyone in their life time would have made mistakes and they moved on by surpassing the weaknesses they faced at first try. There are only rare instances when somebody on their first trial created a discovery just like big bang.
Consider an example of nuclear bombing on Hiroshima and Nagasaki, America did make a huge mistake which caused deleterious effect on Japan and killed so many lives in the disaster but today as we witness this truth of nuclear weapons as one of the hazardous weapon in the world and realized the non-violence practice. Leaders of most of the country today are signing up for the non-proliferation or anti-nuclear alliance such that this tragedy does not repeat in near future. World is progressing towards non-violence.
There is famous saying "Try try until you succeed" is so appropriate. In every field like science, technology, social science, Economy and social welfare; all these fields are flourishing and are on progressive path not merely by one trial. Scientist, Engineers, Social workers all have strives to work for their respective fields by making number of attempts; both fail and success. They have struggled and ultimately reached the goal they wanted to achieve. Consider cases of many scientist like Newton, Einstein and many more; All of them first kept theory in front of the science society and spent years in proving them. Today we all acknowledge their arduous work they did. None of the assertion, experiment and theory generated overnight, there was a hard work of people who learnt from their mistakes, understood what was lacking and apply it on next go.
If we just give up because of failures then there would be no progress and nothing will move ahead. Everything would become stagnant and will left all of us melancholy with no improvement.
Therefore failure can lead to important discoveries and progress and would uplift human for the betterment of all us.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 411, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
...works in same manner. Everyone in their life time would have made mistakes and they moved...
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Line 5, column 30, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: Try
...olence. There is famous saying 'Try try until you succeed' is so appropria...
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Line 7, column 143, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'leave'
Suggestion: leave
...erything would become stagnant and will left all of us melancholy with no improvemen...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...of us melancholy with no improvement. Therefore failure can lead to important discoveri...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'while']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.238317757009 0.238963963785 100% => OK
Verbs: 0.172897196262 0.154291517835 112% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0911214953271 0.0886310499679 103% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0373831775701 0.0506014161523 74% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0467289719626 0.0449626384858 104% => OK
Prepositions: 0.126168224299 0.123526278965 102% => OK
Participles: 0.0490654205607 0.0379742944744 129% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.69393890686 2.82910677849 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0140186915888 0.0316879551592 44% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00467289719626 0.0014075125626 332% => Less particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0794392523364 0.0950106342287 84% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0210280373832 0.0245489744465 86% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00934579439252 0.0157978311181 59% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2332.0 2899.98275862 80% => OK
No of words: 388.0 478.390804598 81% => OK
Chars per words: 6.01030927835 6.0591788892 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.65681771538 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.335051546392 0.369966551584 91% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.268041237113 0.285172536893 94% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.185567010309 0.207245337619 90% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.118556701031 0.136322040163 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69393890686 2.82910677849 95% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 234.298850575 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613402061856 0.492565540709 125% => OK
Word variations: 75.6466300216 56.8184620615 133% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 21.1264367816 85% => OK
Sentence length: 21.5555555556 23.7468607788 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.0869739997 62.0618507366 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.555555556 143.81877709 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5555555556 23.7468607788 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.388888888889 0.728815259664 53% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.87931034483 102% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.71264367816 52% => OK
Readability: 48.3596792669 52.2641144681 93% => OK
Elegance: 1.60909090909 1.64547068916 98% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0917819155389 0.39480681544 23% =>OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0991694403442 0.11556216369 86% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0633537246564 0.0736162880345 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.496272346194 0.531340600358 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.214142016573 0.15197228837 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0346406107775 0.158818324754 22% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443568018897 0.0851127212816 52% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.22547944446 0.388921930462 58% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0400023155516 0.0677916285025 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0643059153517 0.28015025965 23% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367804891397 0.0610219844235 60% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.8591954023 64% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.30459770115 151% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.96264367816 60% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 8.10632183908 74% => OK
Negative topic words: 7.0 3.93390804598 178% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 3.04597701149 33% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 15.0862068966 93% => OK
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Rates: 67.33 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 4.0 Out of 6