In order to help small besiness thrive government should play a minimal role in private businee matters.
Business always starts with a 50 % probability of being successful and according to the statistics a large number of the startups fail or are surviving through no profit at all. But business which thrives, now or then, faces some hardship during the developing days and at that time a backup is required in order to buttress the business. In that matter, government can play a role to make a small business thrive.
In India, due to lack of irrigation, better quality seeds, and farming equipment farmers face a great hardship when the crop fail. Sometimes the condition could grow to such a huge extent that farmer choose the way of suicide. But recently after the new government has taken power it has emphasised the importance of helping and bolstering the farmers state and ways of farming by implementing various schemes. As a result, farmers are rising up from their previous state. Not only farming, India is emphasising on startups, and has provided many schemes for those who want to do startups, which include subsidised interest rates, a buffer in repayment of the loan, government support if want to include in Make in India etc.
With lesser pressure and knowing that government has its back small business can work upto its full potential. With the above-mentioned schemes, small businesses find it a bit easy to take risks and go forward without much thinking of consequences like bankruptcy. After all, fear is responsible for balking a business from taking hard steps.
Today India has the highest growth rate of GDP i.e 7.69 percent and this step of helping startups to grow plays an important role. As the business grow the country is profitable, through increased domestic products, tax returns as well as employment generation.
An American person might argue that in the USA people can get business licence easily and if the government would have intervened in private business matters it would have stopped the growth. But government's non-involvement might also lead to unethical business practices and government's involvement will also help the business to gain trust of its customers.
For a business to thrive, a great deal of risk taking, devotion and self-motivation is required. so if the business know that someone is holding its back, the business will definitely have more courage to move forward. In that matter, the government can play its role to make small businesses thrive. As in case of India, it can be implemented all over the world, since it is a living proof that government should play an important role in order to make the small business thrive.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...cessful and according to the statistics a large number of the startups fail or are surviving thro...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'farmers'' or 'farmer's'?
Suggestion: farmers'; farmer's
...mportance of helping and bolstering the farmers state and ways of farming by implementi...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...if want to include in Make in India etc. With lesser pressure and knowing that go...
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Message: Did you mean 'had intervened'?
Suggestion: had intervened
...ss licence easily and if the government would have intervened in private business matters it would ha...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...votion and self-motivation is required. so if the business know that someone is ho...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'well', 'after all', 'as a result', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.275789473684 0.240241500013 115% => OK
Verbs: 0.164210526316 0.157235817809 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0778947368421 0.0880659088768 88% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0336842105263 0.0497285424764 68% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0231578947368 0.0444667217837 52% => OK
Prepositions: 0.115789473684 0.12292977631 94% => OK
Participles: 0.0505263157895 0.0406280797675 124% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.77925747692 2.79330140395 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0315789473684 0.030933414821 102% => OK
Particles: 0.00210526315789 0.0016655270985 126% => OK
Determiners: 0.109473684211 0.0997080785238 110% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0273684210526 0.0249443105267 110% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0105263157895 0.0148568991511 71% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2608.0 2732.02544248 95% => OK
No of words: 434.0 452.878318584 96% => OK
Chars per words: 6.00921658986 6.0361032391 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.58838876751 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.354838709677 0.366273622748 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.292626728111 0.280924506359 104% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.202764976959 0.200843997647 101% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.122119815668 0.132149295362 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77925747692 2.79330140395 99% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 219.290929204 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559907834101 0.48968727796 114% => OK
Word variations: 66.58165228 55.4138127331 120% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6194690265 92% => OK
Sentence length: 22.8421052632 23.380412469 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3156748078 59.4972553346 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.263157895 141.124799967 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8421052632 23.380412469 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.473684210526 0.674092028746 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.94800884956 121% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.21349557522 96% => OK
Readability: 52.1047780742 51.4728631049 101% => OK
Elegance: 2.0 1.64882698954 121% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22855026303 0.391690518653 58% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0889169919259 0.123202303941 72% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0885905448066 0.077325440228 115% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.556277264995 0.547984918172 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.139025358839 0.149214159877 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100167037077 0.161403998019 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114898960749 0.0892212321368 129% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.239840076947 0.385218514788 62% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0986217357076 0.0692045440612 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137350345678 0.275328986314 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0810721288625 0.0653680567796 124% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.4325221239 125% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.30420353982 94% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88274336283 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 13.0 7.22455752212 180% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 3.66592920354 136% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.70907079646 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 18.0 13.5995575221 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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