People are too quick to take action; instead they should stop to think of the possible consequences of what they might do."
People are too quick to take action; instead they should stop to think of the possible consequences of what they might do."
the decision is good if only it is contemplated
why? (Work done in hurry is not as successful as work done with contemplation and perseverance. Since all the condition )
What if they are not?
take the example of drowning boy how the expedient decision marred his life
Take same example as above and thenmake it support what if the child had done that?
[and give an example to refute the oppotion view
see if you accomodate the view]
now in question it generalize all the people as all the people are not like this, this depends upon their parenting and edication and peer etc.
conclusion: it depends upon people to people, different people have different approach towards life. and hence their decision varies. However the result of the same
Different people have different approach towards life. Thus their approach for achieving their goals varies. In fast paced world like today, everything is rat race. People are running after materialistic goals. Well, it is true it sometimes requires rash decisions because of the different factors like time limitations etc.
however, a well thought out process or right decision taken at the right time will always outweighs the need for a rash decision. Why?
Because while starting a work you will consider its pros and cons, its various approaches. And then make a final decision considering all the factors. Consider a case: you need to buy a phone, which is recently launched. And has also created a hype in the market. You bought that phone on that basis, without doing any research. You later found out that some features are really bad and now you left with just repent. You cannot change your decisions now.
On the other hand, if you had contemplated before buying. You would have come to know about its pros and cons. Thus, you would have averted buying the phone. It's better to research that regret.
Contemplated decisions always save some damage. Consider another example where some children went to a small picnic. After seeing a lake there, they decided to go for a swim. Force of the waves increases during evening time, while they were in hurry, they couldn't think of this factor. And as they entered in the lake, the force of the waves increased. After that they could not get out of the lake. Note here, it was kind of capricious decision. They did not contemplate the decisions and its consequences. But it was timely decision of the safe guards that helped bringing the children to the shore.
Now had they considered their decision thoughtfully they would have thought about 'the force of the waves' factor and would have averted this tragedy.
In conclusion I would like to say different people have different approaches. But the best approach is think your thoughtfully. It’s better to spend some time thinking rather than having regret afterwards.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ne with contemplation and perseverance. Since all the condition What if they are ...
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...d perseverance. Since all the condition What if they are not? take the exampl...
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... condition What if they are not? take the example of drowning boy how the exp...
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...e same example as above and thenmake it support what if the child had done that? [an...
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...odate the view] now in question it generalize all the people as all the people are no...
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Suggestion: However,
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...n varies. However the result of the same Different people have different approach...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...e have different approach towards life. Thus their approach for achieving their goal...
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Suggestion: outweigh
...ion taken at the right time will always outweighs the need for a rash decision. Why? ...
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...dering all the factors. Consider a case: you need to buy a phone, which is recent...
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... bad and now you left with just repent. You cannot change your decisions now. On...
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...ng time, while they were in hurry, they couldnt think of this factor. And as they enter...
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...lake, the force of the waves increased. After that they could not get out of the lake...
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Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to bring' or 'bring'.
Suggestion: to bring; bring
...decision of the safe guards that helped bringing the children to the shore. Now had t...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'thought'.
Suggestion: thought
...nt approaches. But the best approach is think your thoughtfully. It's better to ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'really', 'so', 'then', 'thus', 'well', 'while', 'in conclusion', 'kind of', 'it is true', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.215167548501 0.240241500013 90% => OK
Verbs: 0.186948853616 0.157235817809 119% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0599647266314 0.0880659088768 68% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0582010582011 0.0497285424764 117% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0776014109347 0.0444667217837 175% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.10582010582 0.12292977631 86% => OK
Participles: 0.047619047619 0.0406280797675 117% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.49602693845 2.79330140395 89% => OK
Infinitives: 0.021164021164 0.030933414821 68% => OK
Particles: 0.00352733686067 0.0016655270985 212% => OK
Determiners: 0.0934744268078 0.0997080785238 94% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0194003527337 0.0249443105267 78% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.015873015873 0.0148568991511 107% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3014.0 2732.02544248 110% => OK
No of words: 501.0 452.878318584 111% => OK
Chars per words: 6.01596806387 6.0361032391 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73107062784 4.58838876751 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.317365269461 0.366273622748 87% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.239520958084 0.280924506359 85% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.161676646707 0.200843997647 80% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0998003992016 0.132149295362 76% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49602693845 2.79330140395 89% => OK
Unique words: 255.0 219.290929204 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508982035928 0.48968727796 104% => OK
Word variations: 60.2794620947 55.4138127331 109% => OK
How many sentences: 38.0 20.6194690265 184% => Less sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 13.1842105263 23.380412469 56% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0774955983 59.4972553346 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.3157894737 141.124799967 56% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1842105263 23.380412469 56% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.394736842105 0.674092028746 59% => OK
Paragraphs: 17.0 4.94800884956 344% => There are something wrong with the essay format.
Language errors: 19.0 5.21349557522 364% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 37.1363063347 51.4728631049 72% => OK
Elegance: 1.14207650273 1.64882698954 69% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.388438706773 0.391690518653 99% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0794673108724 0.123202303941 65% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0946764562207 0.077325440228 122% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.538107575773 0.547984918172 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.282604117073 0.149214159877 189% => Sentences are changing often in a paragraphs.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0949027040525 0.161403998019 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127561941544 0.0892212321368 143% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.155797054576 0.385218514788 40% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.113595828293 0.0692045440612 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161562675193 0.275328986314 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.222886664194 0.0653680567796 341% => Less connections among paragraphs
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.4325221239 125% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.30420353982 113% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 19.0 4.88274336283 389% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 9.0 7.22455752212 125% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.66592920354 109% => OK
Neutral topic words: 9.0 2.70907079646 332% => OK
Total topic words: 22.0 13.5995575221 162% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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