As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
With the development of science and technology especially in the past years made people to rely more on technology to solve their problems. The improvement in technology and its contribution makes life more convenient, and effecting the thinking ability of humans to a large extent. Nowadays our surrounding is full of machines and technologies, in absence of which life seems to be very tough.
It is true that thinking ability of humans is deteriorating day by day as computers have replaced humans in almost everything. For instance, people nowadays are using calculators for basic algebra instead of using paper for calculations; they prefer to buy daily commodities through mobile apps and transportation within no time, instead of going to a mall and finding a place for parking; they started using e-mails instead of postcards. Thus, the effect of technology is so much that humans are no longer required to solve their problems on their own, which results in less exploring and deteriorating day by day.
On the other hand, with the emergence of technology, bulk of new problems also arise. Every new invention comes with problems which needs to be solved for further progress and development. As the increasing use of automobiles, have created global warming. Automobiles play a vital role in making lives easier, but the resources like petrol are limited which is further resolved by the increasing use of CNG. Calculators are there for all types of calculations, but people don’t know how to use it. The use of computer is almost everywhere, still there is risk of cyber crimes like hacking and internet frauds.
So, it can be concluded that although technology provide ways to live our life more conveniently by depending on it but at the same time, save our time to think, analyze and provide solutions for the development.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 93, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'invention'.
Suggestion: invention
... bulk of new problems also arise. Every new invention comes with problems which needs to be s...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'so', 'still', 'thus', 'for instance', 'it is true', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.262686567164 0.238963963785 110% => OK
Verbs: 0.173134328358 0.154291517835 112% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0626865671642 0.0886310499679 71% => OK
Adverbs: 0.065671641791 0.0506014161523 130% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0388059701493 0.0449626384858 86% => OK
Prepositions: 0.15223880597 0.123526278965 123% => OK
Participles: 0.0686567164179 0.0379742944744 181% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.91962380645 2.82910677849 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0328358208955 0.0316879551592 104% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0014075125626 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0597014925373 0.0950106342287 63% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00298507462687 0.0245489744465 12% => More modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0149253731343 0.0157978311181 94% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1845.0 2899.98275862 64% => OK
No of words: 305.0 478.390804598 64% => More words wanted.
Chars per words: 6.04918032787 6.0591788892 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.65681771538 90% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.344262295082 0.369966551584 93% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.272131147541 0.285172536893 95% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.193442622951 0.207245337619 93% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.137704918033 0.136322040163 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91962380645 2.82910677849 103% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 234.298850575 73% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55737704918 0.492565540709 113% => OK
Word variations: 58.7953418356 56.8184620615 103% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 21.1264367816 62% => OK
Sentence length: 23.4615384615 23.7468607788 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.1504187935 62.0618507366 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.923076923 143.81877709 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4615384615 23.7468607788 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.692307692308 0.728815259664 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.87931034483 82% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.71264367816 13% => OK
Readability: 50.6746532156 52.2641144681 97% => OK
Elegance: 1.74193548387 1.64547068916 106% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.466172438527 0.39480681544 118% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.116159258777 0.11556216369 101% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0767851168681 0.0736162880345 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.578811431604 0.531340600358 109% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.166582541817 0.15197228837 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.199917496779 0.158818324754 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106749471225 0.0851127212816 125% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.266992001063 0.388921930462 69% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0693419122417 0.0677916285025 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.319866162539 0.28015025965 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0844917328228 0.0610219844235 138% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.8591954023 64% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.30459770115 94% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.96264367816 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 7.0 8.10632183908 86% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.93390804598 102% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 3.04597701149 33% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 12.0 15.0862068966 80% => OK
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 3.0 Out of 6