As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Today's era is technologically advanced and it is also making people's lives easier and comfortable. Today people rely more on the technology to solve their problems. But there is this thing that people are just taking help of the technology and not letting technology do all the work.
Even the computers and robots need human assistance to solve a problem. Definitely being depended on technology will result in lower self thought process at some point of time but also technologies gives various solutions to solve a problem and usually these solutions are fed by the humans themselves.
As the technology advances it makes humans more lethargic but does not deteriorate their thought process. they some how manage to think much better in terms of technologies for their betterment. If we take an example of technologically advanced country like japan people are so much dependent on technologies for their daily chores. At the same time these are the people who are making use of the best of their imaginations into reality.
Thus the technology can slow down the thought process for some but not always does it hampers it gives plethora of solution to think and execute.
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...of their imaginations into reality. Thus the technology can slow down the though...
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Suggestion: hamper
...process for some but not always does it hampers it gives plethora of solution to think ...
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Suggestion: hamper
...process for some but not always does it hampers it gives plethora of solution to think ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'so', 'thus']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.242990654206 0.240241500013 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.177570093458 0.157235817809 113% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0607476635514 0.0880659088768 69% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0841121495327 0.0497285424764 169% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0560747663551 0.0444667217837 126% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.107476635514 0.12292977631 87% => OK
Participles: 0.0327102803738 0.0406280797675 81% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.88800298208 2.79330140395 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0233644859813 0.030933414821 76% => OK
Particles: 0.00467289719626 0.0016655270985 281% => OK
Determiners: 0.0934579439252 0.0997080785238 94% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00934579439252 0.0249443105267 37% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00934579439252 0.0148568991511 63% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1193.0 2732.02544248 44% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 196.0 452.878318584 43% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.08673469388 6.0361032391 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 4.58838876751 82% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.326530612245 0.366273622748 89% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.25 0.280924506359 89% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.183673469388 0.200843997647 91% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.132653061224 0.132149295362 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88800298208 2.79330140395 103% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 219.290929204 53% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591836734694 0.48968727796 121% => OK
Word variations: 55.7092973537 55.4138127331 101% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6194690265 48% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 19.6 23.380412469 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9470799941 59.4972553346 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.3 141.124799967 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 23.380412469 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.674092028746 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.21349557522 115% => OK
Readability: 44.6 51.4728631049 87% => OK
Elegance: 1.20588235294 1.64882698954 73% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.38294753927 0.391690518653 98% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.12187557029 0.123202303941 99% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.044077090507 0.077325440228 57% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.608354648041 0.547984918172 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.181873194794 0.149214159877 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.180504932502 0.161403998019 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0882645182653 0.0892212321368 99% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.238892675553 0.385218514788 62% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0282498327588 0.0692045440612 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251341586093 0.275328986314 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284062947973 0.0653680567796 43% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.4325221239 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.30420353982 57% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88274336283 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 7.0 7.22455752212 97% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.70907079646 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 10.0 13.5995575221 74% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 41.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.5 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.