AS PEOPLE RELY MORE AND MORE ON TECHNOLOGY TO SOLVE THE PROBLEMS, THE ABILITY OF HUMANS TO THINK FOR
THEMSELVES WILL SURELY DETERIORATE.
Linking technology with lazyness and insurity has been a common trend in human civilization.This is the human
nature to have some negativity towards something thats new and most astounding that is far beyond the imagination.
Though there have been many cases where technology have brought some sorts of negativeness and isolation in human lives
and behaviours it would be far too extreme to think technology will diminish the ability of human to decide whats good and
whats not for themselves rather it enhaches their decision, renders them vast oppurtunities to decide whats best.
The development of human civilization has been rocketing in 19th and 20th centuries as compared to the past and the big
chunk of credit goes to the development of technologies; as it has opened new frontiers which previously was unimaginable.
We dont need to wander to get the answers as it right infront of us. Yes, the computers: one of the most important cuttin-
edge technology. It is undoubtly the most important discoveries which has enabled us to go beyond our limitaions.
The matter of fact , I - sitting on one remote place of Nepal- am giving the GRE exam of Amercan Board is a prime example
of the point.
Similarly, the development we have had in the Genetic fields like DNA chromosomes, genome and hybrid plants are and animals
are the result of this advancement. In the past , people used to gaze the stars at night and had their say on whats out
there, today thats not a new thing for us. We are looking for extraterristrial life hoping to find the intellegence far beyond
our planet, solar system and milkiway galaxy.
Not just science, due to technology we have had access to our past. We are finding something new everyday
Just right now, thousands of new information may be found somewhere which could shake the whole base of our existance.
We are learning about ourselves going back in time. That is the kind of prowess our technology have endowed us with.
Having said all of that, the simple fact cannot be over-rulled that with every major descovery, with every breakthrough
in technology there is always the danger of mishandeling. The sole purpose of mobiles was to save the time of human, the
social networks was to share the information but it has only isolated more and limited us within ourselves. The kids are
falling victims of the gadgets ruining their childhood and missing all the outer environment fun and experience.
Technology has always touched us and continue to do so. Millions of new discoveries will be made , hundreds and thousands
of new technology will be invented ; some might have a negative impact upon mishandeling but in no possible ways will they
deminish the abilities of human to think for themselves. As there is a famous saying "people will always react with negativity to
the things that they do not understand"
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'similarly', 'so', 'as to', 'kind of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.227272727273 0.240241500013 95% => OK
Verbs: 0.176136363636 0.157235817809 112% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0871212121212 0.0880659088768 99% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0511363636364 0.0497285424764 103% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0643939393939 0.0444667217837 145% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.111742424242 0.12292977631 91% => OK
Participles: 0.0568181818182 0.0406280797675 140% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.88670716083 2.79330140395 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0340909090909 0.030933414821 110% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0890151515152 0.0997080785238 89% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0208333333333 0.0249443105267 84% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0113636363636 0.0148568991511 76% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2900.0 2732.02544248 106% => OK
No of words: 489.0 452.878318584 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.93047034765 6.0361032391 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70248278971 4.58838876751 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.312883435583 0.366273622748 85% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.229038854806 0.280924506359 82% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.167689161554 0.200843997647 83% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.130879345603 0.132149295362 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88670716083 2.79330140395 103% => OK
Unique words: 262.0 219.290929204 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535787321063 0.48968727796 109% => OK
Word variations: 64.4957591739 55.4138127331 116% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6194690265 97% => OK
Sentence length: 24.45 23.380412469 105% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.4118208028 59.4972553346 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.0 141.124799967 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.45 23.380412469 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.4 0.674092028746 59% => OK
Paragraphs: 25.0 4.94800884956 505% => There are something wrong with the essay format.
Language errors: 21.0 5.21349557522 403% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 47.3538854806 51.4728631049 92% => OK
Elegance: 1.35714285714 1.64882698954 82% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.434852505265 0.391690518653 111% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.114901020314 0.123202303941 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0681136981401 0.077325440228 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.793225233095 0.547984918172 145% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.219571122106 0.149214159877 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.168960399867 0.161403998019 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695383800209 0.0892212321368 78% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.129173295587 0.385218514788 34% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0719098207077 0.0692045440612 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154469954449 0.275328986314 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0854552884777 0.0653680567796 131% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.4325221239 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.30420353982 132% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88274336283 123% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 7.22455752212 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.66592920354 109% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.70907079646 185% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.5995575221 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.