As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate
The author in the issue talks about the ability of humans to think for themselves due to technology. At the very outset, I would like to state that I am in complete agreement with what author says. There are many reasons for any agreement with the author’s view. I will try to enable my views in the succeeding paragraphs.
It is human nature to take shortcuts. If we have easier path we even don’t try to go on longer & difficult path to solve our problems. As author says technology do our work easier, so we don’t search for difficult path. As the technology come in our life it makes our problems easier to solve. In olden times many problems are faced & it takes mental & physical pain so people try to make their problem easier by advancing technology. So I agree with that humans dependency on technology is increased & as I say before I we get easier path we can’t even think for other option so technology fulfil our needs so we can’t even stress our mind to think. But I also agree with that the advancement of technology is itself a wonder of human mind.
Due to advancement of technology we have forgotten the pains that our fathers do. If we are in that situation then & then we can understand the pain of that problem. At earlier time when people travel place to place on foot with heavy loads they understand the pain & at that situation their mind thinks for easy solution for relieve that pain that they have faced. Then they invent wheel & their life become easier as to travel with heavy loads.
The power of human brain is very sharp & active. But it is important to keep it working by doing some tasks. As calculator is invented the power of humans to calculate even an easy calculation is reduced. As our father now-a-days also calculate faster than our generation. As a computer is invented it also reduce the human brain ability to think if we have any problem than search on it & it will give fast & easy solution. As Smart phones invented we even don’t remember any mobile no. as our father easily remember all the mob. Numbers easily.
If the machine have no work & it remains close for much time it would start creaking & eventually stop working. Our brain is also same like as machine if we less to do solve problems or situations using brains, its ability to solve problem is deteriorate. Now its upon us to deteriorate our brain capacity or will remain same?? To maintain our brain ability to think we should calculate our monthly income without use of calculators or we should try to do problems by ourself without using technologies.
So, I agree with author that as people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate But as I earlier said technology is creation of human minds but we should try to active our minds.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...f we have easier path we even don't try to go on longer & difficult path to ...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e don't search for difficult path. As the technology come in our life it make...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
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...ancing technology. So I agree with that humans dependency on technology is increased &...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...orgotten the pains that our fathers do. If we are in that situation then & then we...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...to keep it working by doing some tasks. As calculator is invented the power of hum...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...te even an easy calculation is reduced. As our father now-a-days also calculate fa...
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...o calculate faster than our generation. As a computer is invented it also reduce t...
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Message: Did you mean 'reduces'?
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...tion. As a computer is invented it also reduce the human brain ability to think if we ...
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...it & it will give fast & easy solution. As Smart phones invented we even don'...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'deteriorated'.
Suggestion: deteriorated
...brains, its ability to solve problem is deteriorate. Now its upon us to deteriorate our br...
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...ity to solve problem is deteriorate. Now its upon us to deteriorate our brain cap...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'as to']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.206956521739 0.240241500013 86% => OK
Verbs: 0.189565217391 0.157235817809 121% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0695652173913 0.0880659088768 79% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0504347826087 0.0497285424764 101% => OK
Pronouns: 0.109565217391 0.0444667217837 246% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.130434782609 0.12292977631 106% => OK
Participles: 0.0260869565217 0.0406280797675 64% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.58139281194 2.79330140395 92% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0434782608696 0.030933414821 141% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0539130434783 0.0997080785238 54% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0208695652174 0.0249443105267 84% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00521739130435 0.0148568991511 35% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2872.0 2732.02544248 105% => OK
No of words: 517.0 452.878318584 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55512572534 6.0361032391 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76839952204 4.58838876751 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.297872340426 0.366273622748 81% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.193423597679 0.280924506359 69% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.141199226306 0.200843997647 70% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.10251450677 0.132149295362 78% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58139281194 2.79330140395 92% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 219.290929204 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.425531914894 0.48968727796 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 48.7470739276 55.4138127331 88% => OK
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6194690265 136% => OK
Sentence length: 18.4642857143 23.380412469 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.8043882144 59.4972553346 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.571428571 141.124799967 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4642857143 23.380412469 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.214285714286 0.674092028746 32% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.94800884956 121% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.21349557522 211% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 37.8066454822 51.4728631049 73% => OK
Elegance: 1.03980099502 1.64882698954 63% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.447226687923 0.391690518653 114% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.162073505592 0.123202303941 132% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.106208450206 0.077325440228 137% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.492864076044 0.547984918172 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.18485690253 0.149214159877 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134937492091 0.161403998019 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126214611796 0.0892212321368 141% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.266305912855 0.385218514788 69% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0660205556699 0.0692045440612 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2955516253 0.275328986314 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.167858211288 0.0653680567796 257% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 10.4325221239 182% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.30420353982 113% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88274336283 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 14.0 7.22455752212 194% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 3.66592920354 136% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 21.0 13.5995575221 154% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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