People who are the most committed to an idea or policies are also the most critical of it.
The world is constantly seeing new advancements and inventions and the sole reason for it is the involvement the dedicated people behind them. The indication that people who are devoted towards an idea or a plan are the ones who have entire knowledge about it and can be considered to be the most critical element holds true to some extent.
As these people work on their proposal for several hours and days, they are aware about all the pros and cons about it, they can easily solve problems as they have through understanding about it. For example if we consider the social networking site “Facebook” which can be considered to be one of the revolutions of the 20th century was only due to commitment of Mark Zuckerberg towards it. Mark was the most important element behind development of Facebook and can be very good example for the above argument. Although, we might not know some flaws in Facebook, he would be aware of it because of his expertise in it.
People work day in and day out to make their ideas successful and for that they sacrifice lot of the things they would like to do and hence are the major part of it. As in case of Honorable Narendra Modi the prime minister of India has to face lot of sacrifices to implement his “Swacha Bharat Abhiyan” mission, instead of taking rest in his free time, he has to attend several campaigns in order to promote and influence people.
On the contrary, some people are obdurate and think that their action plan is perfect and it would lead to success, this constraint their thinking capability. While, a novice in that field can interpret the idea in a different way and may have different opinions about it. So, person behind the idea may not be able to think out of box and this can one of the reasons for the plan failure.
In sum, success or failure of a plan or an idea is due to people working behind it and hence, they can be considered as most important component of it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a different way" with adverb for "different"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Discourse Markers used:
['hence', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'while', 'as to', 'for example', 'on the contrary']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.237113402062 0.240241500013 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.134020618557 0.157235817809 85% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0721649484536 0.0880659088768 82% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0309278350515 0.0497285424764 62% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0773195876289 0.0444667217837 174% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.146907216495 0.12292977631 120% => OK
Participles: 0.020618556701 0.0406280797675 51% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.64316172655 2.79330140395 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0335051546392 0.030933414821 108% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.090206185567 0.0997080785238 90% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0335051546392 0.0249443105267 134% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00773195876289 0.0148568991511 52% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1968.0 2732.02544248 72% => OK
No of words: 352.0 452.878318584 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59090909091 6.0361032391 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.58838876751 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.275568181818 0.366273622748 75% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.207386363636 0.280924506359 74% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.147727272727 0.200843997647 74% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.110795454545 0.132149295362 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64316172655 2.79330140395 95% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 219.290929204 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497159090909 0.48968727796 102% => OK
Word variations: 52.075357264 55.4138127331 94% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6194690265 58% => OK
Sentence length: 29.3333333333 23.380412469 125% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8872021155 59.4972553346 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 164.0 141.124799967 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3333333333 23.380412469 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 0.674092028746 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.21349557522 19% => OK
Readability: 50.071969697 51.4728631049 97% => OK
Elegance: 1.67021276596 1.64882698954 101% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.422646872317 0.391690518653 108% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.148237020195 0.123202303941 120% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0779118583248 0.077325440228 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.669242725485 0.547984918172 122% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.14695956482 0.149214159877 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.200064874983 0.161403998019 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10297463237 0.0892212321368 115% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.352430205031 0.385218514788 91% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0459430016347 0.0692045440612 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.295998984205 0.275328986314 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0878307431522 0.0653680567796 134% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.4325221239 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.30420353982 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88274336283 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 7.22455752212 111% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 13.5995575221 81% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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