People who are the most deeply committed to an idea or policy are also the most critical of it

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People who are the most deeply committed to an idea or policy are also the most critical of it.

People have different attitudes to an idea or policy, committed or critical or both, depending on their understanding about it. One group of them are those who are the most deeply committed to an idea or policy are also the most critical of it——they seem to be the paradox, which are not lack of the examples in the society. But there are also such group of people who are always deeply attached to an idea or policy, never waver. Now the detailed analysis is as follows.

Generally speaking, people are deeply committed to an idea or policy, which they have made a better understanding, based on their knowledge and experience. Often they are equipped with rich knowledge about this idea or policy by looking for and reading a lot of books about it, sometimes they do not stop learning until they completely comprehend it. As for an idea or policy, they will make their conclusions with rational, scientific analysis, especially for a policy, they consider what it will bring about to them, beneficial to individuals or a group of individuals, and the feasibility of it under the present conditions, and the consequences to both human beings and the circumstance when it is implemented. In some sense, it is an extraordinary process for them continually to explore it, discuss it, accumulate lore about it.

With the in-depth cognition, they gradually discover the drawbacks, flaws about the idea or policy, even that the idea or policy is questionable, afterwards they become fastidious about it, and hope that the idea or policy is more perfect. Scientists are such example, who question about the idea to which they are deeply committed. For instance, Darwin, the founder of theory of evolution, admitted that his theory had some weaknesses——the emerged species that had already developed completely, the evolutionary species that had not been found, no intermediate species. Moreover, he was a Christian but doubted it, later he gave up this faith owing to his daughter’s death. Now neo-Darwinism has been formed, which explained that the origin of species is because a chain of accidental chemistry reaction, yet it is also criticized by evolutionists, who question the theory itself, and hold the views that there is no immediate species, just as Darwin pointed out. From this perspective, people who are committed to an idea do not stop questioning the idea as they collect new data about it. Another instance is Confuscius, as a great thinker in China, who wondered that his theory had the idea of brainwashing education like the sense of hierarchy, and his words and thoughts largely were for the rulers to dominate the common people.

However, it is not all the people deeply committed to an idea or policy who are also critical of it. Everybody knows that no president in the world opposites his policies that he makes whatever it brings about to the public. They believe in the infallibility and authority of their policies, and they have firm confidence that all the policies they make always benefit the nation’s future development and progress, and improve the welfare of the people. But, some people do no think so. Now, take a piece of China’s policy as an example, Three Gorges Dam, the world’s largest power station, has been a controversial topic both domestically and abroad. Wangli Huang, the famous water conservancy engineering expert, violently opposed the project of Three Gorges Dam from the start of its design to the completion, because he believed that it would result in serious damage in the future to both people and nature, unfortunately, the government did not take his advice, who regarded it as a social and economic success. There are countless examples in the society, such as scientists, enterprisers, doctors, educators, parents, and so on. Particularly, parents in China believe that they never make mistakes in educating their children, and insist on their idea which their children must observe.

In short, the speaker’s claim very well reflects the phenomenon that people aver the paradox who are both the most committed to an idea or policy and the most critical of it——which, to me, is wise, reasonable for people to develop a kind of critical thinking. But in addition to the statement, other situations also exist, which is people who keep on an idea or policy in their whole life.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, moreover, so, well, as for, for instance, in addition, in short, kind of, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 19.5258426966 164% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 38.0 14.8657303371 256% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 32.0 11.3162921348 283% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 78.0 33.0505617978 236% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 82.0 58.6224719101 140% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3660.0 2235.4752809 164% => OK
No of words: 723.0 442.535393258 163% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0622406639 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.18542759274 4.55969084622 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93874572215 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 332.0 215.323595506 154% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.459197786999 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1161.0 704.065955056 165% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Interrogative: 4.0 0.740449438202 540% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 12.0 1.77640449438 676% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.6436379661 60.3974514979 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.4 118.986275619 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.92 23.4991977007 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44 5.21951772744 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.46408284332 0.243740707755 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15320550093 0.0831039109588 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.163926838734 0.0758088955206 216% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.337578887181 0.150359130593 225% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.166343306107 0.0667264976115 249% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 14.1392134831 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 48.8420337079 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.66 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 187.0 100.480337079 186% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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