People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
There is a saying that 'people can not take back what they have already said and done' which is no doubt make a complete sense. Everyone should take their decision before they are about to do something and those who takes that decision by plausible reasoning which justifies their entire action are obviously the prudent ones. Though sometimes we take the decisions based on our emotions, I will not support that for further clarification of my thoughts regarding focusing on the justification of our decision.
First of all, taking a decision is always tough for several reasons like what will happen afterward is completely depends on that, ultimately that sometimes force us to become diffident about our call. If someone is prudent then she or he will think about the results of their decisions, I mean they definitely do not want to give their effort in just vain, they want a fruitful outcome of their hard effort. There is no point of regretting after a remorseful outcome. My own experience is a good example of this, back in 2014, I have taken the decision of appearing on the GRE test as pursuing my higher study was the only thing I could have thought about that time. So without thinking about the consequence, I have registered for the test 1 prior to the test date. Everything was fine since the result window came out after the test, I could not believe what did just happened - it was a below 300 scores which is blatantly not good for getting an admission to my ambitious universities. I was completely broke, but that is not the point, the point is - I took the decision of appearing the test without further thoughts and there was at no point I could have reverted that back. So I learned the harshness of making a call based on my emotion, I should have justified my level of preparation before appearing on the test.
At this point, I would like to focus on making a decision and learning from the others is also important to justify one's own one. Someone may think about stepping into a big ocean which is conspicuously new to him or her. At that point, he or she should have to look around for his or her ancestors. If he or she does not get someone to help them, simply they can use everyone's friend 'GOOGLE, an ocean of information. As I said earlier, after my test I was broken, however, that did not preclude my possibility of getting a good score. I thought to reappear for the test, I was prudent this time - I make a proper timetable, planning and detect my weakness' and the best thing is I did everything with the help of GOOGLE. Today I am taking the test and I am confident enough to get around 310.
In conclusion, I would say, taking a decision is always troublesome, but if someone take the decision based on their emotion as I did, they might get a futile result which will not hurt their feelings, also that will cost a lot of money as well as a good amount of important time of their life. It is better to be prudent enough to justify our thoughts before jumping to draw it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 85, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'takes'.
Suggestion: takes
...n is always troublesome, but if someone take the decision based on their emotion as ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'regarding', 'so', 'then', 'well', 'i mean', 'in conclusion', 'no doubt', 'as well as', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.170568561873 0.240241500013 71% => OK
Verbs: 0.192307692308 0.157235817809 122% => OK
Adjectives: 0.056856187291 0.0880659088768 65% => OK
Adverbs: 0.066889632107 0.0497285424764 135% => OK
Pronouns: 0.108695652174 0.0444667217837 244% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.120401337793 0.12292977631 98% => OK
Participles: 0.0501672240803 0.0406280797675 123% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.54117530656 2.79330140395 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0250836120401 0.030933414821 81% => OK
Particles: 0.00501672240803 0.0016655270985 301% => OK
Determiners: 0.0919732441472 0.0997080785238 92% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0284280936455 0.0249443105267 114% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0150501672241 0.0148568991511 101% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3016.0 2732.02544248 110% => OK
No of words: 552.0 452.878318584 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46376811594 6.0361032391 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84713113593 4.58838876751 106% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.282608695652 0.366273622748 77% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.202898550725 0.280924506359 72% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.141304347826 0.200843997647 70% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.088768115942 0.132149295362 67% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54117530656 2.79330140395 91% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 219.290929204 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.460144927536 0.48968727796 94% => OK
Word variations: 54.4487587056 55.4138127331 98% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6194690265 97% => OK
Sentence length: 27.6 23.380412469 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.7374678432 59.4972553346 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.8 141.124799967 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6 23.380412469 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.8 0.674092028746 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.21349557522 19% => OK
Readability: 47.8898550725 51.4728631049 93% => OK
Elegance: 0.927272727273 1.64882698954 56% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277303857098 0.391690518653 71% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.120661842973 0.123202303941 98% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0645384912829 0.077325440228 83% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.473865239884 0.547984918172 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.126522951451 0.149214159877 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107315074298 0.161403998019 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638202314644 0.0892212321368 72% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.397633166875 0.385218514788 103% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0895946779043 0.0692045440612 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201792746993 0.275328986314 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524091928093 0.0653680567796 80% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.4325221239 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.30420353982 113% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88274336283 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 7.22455752212 97% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.66592920354 109% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.70907079646 111% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.5995575221 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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